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Array ( [sid] => 59986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => faraway love... [time] => 2004-08-13 07:07:41 [hometext] => khalid... an odd to pure love... [bodytext] => FARAWAY LOVE...

fearful to live alone until his eighty...
he was sad on his window...
like he was stock on a train...
one stop beyond his destination...

the night is mine and yours...
faraway love...
and i live now only to revive you...
but look now that words are not enough...
words are just words and the truth is you... you...
you are here to guide me with your dark flare...
through this chaos... through my chaos... which you took care to fill it with your voice...

why did i come? where am i going? for what i am looking for? why without you my light become less?...
faraway... faraway you seems to be my love...
faraway... faraway you seems to be now...

you left your marks so indelible...
so many clothes, so many draws in the air, so many marks in the shadow...
how can i say that all this was energy and now you return to your source...
i want to come and found you...
you are so sweet and i love you...
and when i am going to meet you...
i want you to wear the same clothes that i have met you with...
that's how i loved you... that's how i believed to you...

i felt that you was in a distance sometime...
and that you had obtain this unsecured feelings...
by strangling everything inside you, you was so close to drown your self...

to this rush journey we have on this earth...
each one of us is leaving behind him one breathe, one aura...
and after that everything will be erased...
don't look to find the deeper secrets...
they don't exist...
and if they do exist, we simple don't know them...
we just don't know everything...

i have no more tears...
and i hate writing when writing is a mean of appeasement for me...
when gives me the feeling of doing my duty to you...
cause my only duty honey is to love you...

always yours...
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faraway love...

Contributed by mariano on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:07:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



FARAWAY LOVE...

fearful to live alone until his eighty...
he was sad on his window...
like he was stock on a train...
one stop beyond his destination...

the night is mine and yours...
faraway love...
and i live now only to revive you...
but look now that words are not enough...
words are just words and the truth is you... you...
you are here to guide me with your dark flare...
through this chaos... through my chaos... which you took care to fill it with your voice...

why did i come? where am i going? for what i am looking for? why without you my light become less?...
faraway... faraway you seems to be my love...
faraway... faraway you seems to be now...

you left your marks so indelible...
so many clothes, so many draws in the air, so many marks in the shadow...
how can i say that all this was energy and now you return to your source...
i want to come and found you...
you are so sweet and i love you...
and when i am going to meet you...
i want you to wear the same clothes that i have met you with...
that's how i loved you... that's how i believed to you...

i felt that you was in a distance sometime...
and that you had obtain this unsecured feelings...
by strangling everything inside you, you was so close to drown your self...

to this rush journey we have on this earth...
each one of us is leaving behind him one breathe, one aura...
and after that everything will be erased...
don't look to find the deeper secrets...
they don't exist...
and if they do exist, we simple don't know them...
we just don't know everything...

i have no more tears...
and i hate writing when writing is a mean of appeasement for me...
when gives me the feeling of doing my duty to you...
cause my only duty honey is to love you...

always yours...




Copyright © mariano ... [ 2004-08-13 07:07:41]
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Re: faraway love... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:03:45 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful composition. A true masterpiece. I loved the flow of this. great job

Kimberly


Re: faraway love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:47:54 PM AEST
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very powerful!
deep and expressive....great job!


Re: faraway love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:15:59 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write....so sincere...
Welcome to YPDC.......
Jenni




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