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Array ( [sid] => 59502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Water slides [time] => 2004-08-09 16:20:21 [hometext] => A day of fun and sun! [bodytext] => Here we go, Off to the water park, to and fro
Standing and waiting with antiscipation
Hearts racing with joy delight
As the kiddos race to the day of their life

So many things, to see and do
Off to the rain fortress,and whoppie yahoo
The yellow slides which twist and turn
Makes one wonder if they are what they yearn

The sheer fear, of sliding down water slides
Then its time, riding and screaming making one
Knowing the wait is going to be so much fun! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Water slides

Contributed by brew on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Here we go, Off to the water park, to and fro
Standing and waiting with antiscipation
Hearts racing with joy delight
As the kiddos race to the day of their life

So many things, to see and do
Off to the rain fortress,and whoppie yahoo
The yellow slides which twist and turn
Makes one wonder if they are what they yearn

The sheer fear, of sliding down water slides
Then its time, riding and screaming making one
Knowing the wait is going to be so much fun!

Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-08-09 16:20:21]
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Re: Water slides (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:02:22 PM AEST
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lovely write.

Re: Water slides (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:12:55 AM AEST
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A happy and fun write, beautiful, no depression. I love it, reminds me of a ride.....The Log Ride....the anticipation, the getting closer and closer as the line inched along, the music roaring the noise of the happy screams......then the ride winding its way along.......to the hill.......higher and higher..it rose to the sky.......and then as you went over the top, all one seen was blue sky....then the dive bomb and incredible splash at the end.....soaking wet and scrambling to get back in line!!!!!!

Thank you.

Re: Water slides (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 04:32:19 AM AEST
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Now this is a fun read.Thank you for sharing.

Sinned

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