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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Few Fleeting Moments and Instantaneous
[time] => 2004-08-09 09:41:50
[hometext] => Sad isn't a strong enough word... though I think I've found a few... (This is about my b/f... he's thinking about leaving...I'm falling apart)
[bodytext] => A Few Fleeting Moments: At first it was a chilling-- a settling of fright In a snap it was a head shake-- a need for chance of "It's alright" And suddenly it's hollow-- with skeleton's sunken eyes Then it's shattered-- overtaking, falling up into the skies All the while it's frantic failure-- grasping, clawing at the sea Only hoping--praying, needing for this terror not to be Instantaneous: In an instant I sense your melancholy tone In an instant I hear that you're vexed about it all In an instant I find that you think you have missed out In an instant I seem to be slipping inside In an instant I can't quiet the beating of my heart In an instant I feel like I'm choking on air In an instant I can't grip anything anymore In an instant I'm falling apart as I sit In an instant I rock in that childish pose In an instant I have vommitted and can't feel my mouth In an instant I cry in every sense of the word ...All in the instant I think about losing you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 32 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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