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Array ( [sid] => 59417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A brown eyed girl [time] => 2004-08-08 23:17:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We talk as if we are just friends
Deep down inside.. my heart bends,
Looking into those brown eyes of yours,
My stomach starts to turn.

Many times i wanted to tell you the truth,
How deep my feelings are for you,
Not sure how you would take it,
Maybe one day we can try and make it.

See all the little things you do,
Always keeps me in a good mood,
Nothing feels more right,
Than having you by my side.

I'll do whatever it takes,
To show you that my love is not fake,
Maybe i will one day see,
What it will take to have you with me.

I can't discribe the feeling,
Every time i look into your eyes, i must be dreaming,
Only god knows how much i did love you
Then i had to screw things up by arguing,

See i was there for you from the start,
I will always be here if you should call,
All this stuff i have been through,
Sorry if i have ever hurt you.

I know i have done some shady stuff in the past,
But what matters is now we are having a blast,
Remember walking me home hand in hand?
Chilling on my rooftop like it was a bed?

Everytime i did see you, my heart would skipped a beat,
I couldn't wait until the next time when we could meet,
I hope one day you will see,
That you mean more than the world to me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 2 [informant] => AdamChantell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A brown eyed girl

Contributed by AdamChantell on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 11:17:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



We talk as if we are just friends
Deep down inside.. my heart bends,
Looking into those brown eyes of yours,
My stomach starts to turn.

Many times i wanted to tell you the truth,
How deep my feelings are for you,
Not sure how you would take it,
Maybe one day we can try and make it.

See all the little things you do,
Always keeps me in a good mood,
Nothing feels more right,
Than having you by my side.

I'll do whatever it takes,
To show you that my love is not fake,
Maybe i will one day see,
What it will take to have you with me.

I can't discribe the feeling,
Every time i look into your eyes, i must be dreaming,
Only god knows how much i did love you
Then i had to screw things up by arguing,

See i was there for you from the start,
I will always be here if you should call,
All this stuff i have been through,
Sorry if i have ever hurt you.

I know i have done some shady stuff in the past,
But what matters is now we are having a blast,
Remember walking me home hand in hand?
Chilling on my rooftop like it was a bed?

Everytime i did see you, my heart would skipped a beat,
I couldn't wait until the next time when we could meet,
I hope one day you will see,
That you mean more than the world to me.




Copyright © AdamChantell ... [ 2004-08-08 23:17:49]
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Re: A brown eyed girl (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 12:45:51 AM AEST
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Great write...definitely know what this is like. thanks for putting my own feelings into words. Keep it up
the raven


Re: A brown eyed girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:26:30 AM AEST
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besides the obvious gender differences... I too know exactly how this feels... very good write... thanks for sharing.


Re: A brown eyed girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:27:09 PM AEST
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Yet another fabulous write! Great job, I am again amazed.
Katie


Re: A brown eyed girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 06:21:52 PM AEST
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A brown Eyed Girl, I like the title, it instantly got me to read it.
A great Write, I like how you manage the feelings.
Every verse was liked. It is so good.
;D




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