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Be every day
Wrapped in your arms
I'd ever stay

But time for that
Has yet to be
For now we must
Wait patiently

So sorrow not
My Love, be glad
Warm in my arms
You'll not be sad

Oh, Carrie dear
I love you so
I'll never, never
Let you go [comments] => 10 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Wait Patiently

Contributed by wachumiri on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To by your side
Be every day
Wrapped in your arms
I'd ever stay

But time for that
Has yet to be
For now we must
Wait patiently

So sorrow not
My Love, be glad
Warm in my arms
You'll not be sad

Oh, Carrie dear
I love you so
I'll never, never
Let you go

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-08-08 18:12:52]
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Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaylynne on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:16:45 PM AEST
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good poem

~jaylynne

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:16:49 PM AEST
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Whoa! I need to let the chills go away now. True love waits patiently, so I trust you to continue to show your love by your actions. Thank you for your love. I love you, and don't let go.
~Carrie~

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:15:23 PM AEST
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Awww.... how sweet... Thihs poem is as sweet as diabetes!! haha.. Great work, pal!

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by Oriana on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:54:39 PM AEST
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*grabs a box of tissues and wipes eyes* That is so sweet let us know when you get married okay! ^_^ Oriana

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by TheBlackVoid on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:59:23 AM AEST
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*Feels a lil alienaited* lol as i see u have many friends as well as fans of this poem..well here i add another fan. Great write :)
Alucia,

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:31:56 PM AEST
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oy.... don't worry, you WILL be married!! Just do as you said.... wait patiently for it! :-)

Em

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:39:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful....Good luck on marrying Carrie! You seem like such a great guy and she should be so lucky to be with you until she or you dies...great poem

summer

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:38:15 PM AEST
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I love these short writes of yours! oh and watch out for those librarians they've been known to do things with..... you know (books)!!

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:14:30 AM AEST
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This is very cool. I have read a few poems like this by you and each one is filled with purity and respect. I hope things work out for the two of you.

Re: Wait Patiently (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:39:08 AM AEST
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Carrie, if you don't marry him, I have a single friend. Just kidding. Great job.

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