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Gravol: The Sleeping Pill
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:19:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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reality
it slowly slips forward
and into my mind
poisoning the only goodness
that flows through my viens
i cant get away from it
its forever there
stalking me
pulling at my skin
calling to me
its threats echo through my mind
loud and clear
so evil
and unforgiving
like Satans child
i try to hide from it
in the only place ment for true
i stash myself away
into sleep
the only place where reality is unimaginable
so into a deep sleep i travel
tho
one cant sleep all day
in that case
extra help is used
thats why i take Gravol, the sleeping pill with endless opportunities
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TwEeK
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2004-08-07 21:19:33]
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Re: Gravol: The Sleeping Pill
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by MomentInTime on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:49:43 PM AEST
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The poem would have been better off without the reference to what you use as an escape - that way it's left for the reader to consider what their own form of escape is.
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