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Array ( [sid] => 58941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Dark Mind [time] => 2004-08-05 00:18:54 [hometext] => Please Comment...It means alot....Thanx! [bodytext] => Enter into my dark mind
Filled with fear never to be left behind
I fear the very person I have become
I never thought I could be so numb

Staying up late at night
Crying until I’ve lost my sight
Taking the sharp razor blade
Hoping that the pain will fade

Thoughts of suicide fill my head
Just lying there hoping I was dead
It’s seems so easy to just let go
Just cut a little too deep and watch the blood flow

All I want is for the thoughts to leave me
All I can do though is give a silent plea
But it never seems to end
How long will this take to mend

I just want to be set free
Let my mind sail over the soothing sea
Just a release from everyday life
Without having to use my sharp knife

That’s all that I will ask
Why does that have to be such a hard task
Please just let my mind be at rest
I just can’t stand being so depressed
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My Dark Mind

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:18:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Enter into my dark mind
Filled with fear never to be left behind
I fear the very person I have become
I never thought I could be so numb

Staying up late at night
Crying until I’ve lost my sight
Taking the sharp razor blade
Hoping that the pain will fade

Thoughts of suicide fill my head
Just lying there hoping I was dead
It’s seems so easy to just let go
Just cut a little too deep and watch the blood flow

All I want is for the thoughts to leave me
All I can do though is give a silent plea
But it never seems to end
How long will this take to mend

I just want to be set free
Let my mind sail over the soothing sea
Just a release from everyday life
Without having to use my sharp knife

That’s all that I will ask
Why does that have to be such a hard task
Please just let my mind be at rest
I just can’t stand being so depressed

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-05 00:18:54]
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Re: My Dark Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:34:41 AM AEST
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good write!! i jus pray it's not true... i used ta write like this but things do get better as they say.... if u wanna talk even if u don't want to i would still like 4 u 2 ttm or sum1..... u can ttm on aim,msnm,email,or this i am here 4 u...

Re: My Dark Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:39:33 AM AEST
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hello
well,great poem,and way of expressing yourself,sad though.you remind me so much of my best friend,and i stopped him once from comitting this,and i let him know i care and love him so much.so don't worry and don't do this act,really,if you look closely around you,life is beautiful,and don't forget,always after the storm,there's always a rainbow.take care.
love always,
andrea

Re: My Dark Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:09:17 AM AEST
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You know, I hit the same pit a few days ago, and it's always hard to get out of such ruts. It's good to hear another's voice from within the void.

Great, heart-felt write

Re: My Dark Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:12:59 AM AEST
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Get to a Dr. They can help with meds. We all need help from time to time. I usse to think about suicide but meds help tremdiously.
I actually enjoy life now.
Luv, hugs, hope, strength,
emy

Re: My Dark Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:58:17 AM AEST
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this was a really good expressive account of depression an how it feels, I can relate to these feelings very well, and am battling through them still to this day, it's a hard slog, but I will get there... as will you Crimson tears,

great write,
pixie xx

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