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[sid] => 58873
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Darkened Comfort
[time] => 2004-08-04 12:29:05
[hometext] => another old one but i'm working on improving my poetry so feedback on old stuff it very helpful
[bodytext] => Friends will come and friends will go, but you yourself will always show All through life you can’t escape, yourself and all your bitter self hate In the mirror you see your face, attractiveness can’t find a trace Trash the mirrors and look no more, reflections in the water ignored Throw a rock into the pond, ripples break it and beyond Deserted and now left alone, all by yourself and on your own The dark is solace, comfort, aid, the darkest of the darkest shades If you watch the light cascade, for a moment you’re betrayed Swiftly bring that darkness back, or fulfillment you will lack Surroundings closing in on you, large places make you feel untrue But tiny spots hidden away, bring comfort and never betray Small dark places, comfort zones, where you can sit and be alone Not a single soul for miles, at least it seems that way for a while [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 25 [informant] => anonymussme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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