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Array ( [sid] => 58830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => bled me dry [time] => 2004-08-04 07:26:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i,m still bleeding from the wounds you inflicted
i,m still trying not to let it show
still smiling with that ugly fake smile
but i,m not even coping kidding myself it,ll b o.k

if i was o.k why do i cut deeper every day
if i was fine then why can't i leave all these memories behind
why is it i try to forget but i cannot forgive
with all of these scars this is the way that i live
stuck in my own demise
all i want is to be free from all of your lies

you tied my hands and cut my wrists
you cut my throat with all your lies
you bled this heart dry
and burnt all my feeling
now i am blank without any meaning

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bled me dry

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:26:57 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

i,m still bleeding from the wounds you inflicted
i,m still trying not to let it show
still smiling with that ugly fake smile
but i,m not even coping kidding myself it,ll b o.k

if i was o.k why do i cut deeper every day
if i was fine then why can't i leave all these memories behind
why is it i try to forget but i cannot forgive
with all of these scars this is the way that i live
stuck in my own demise
all i want is to be free from all of your lies

you tied my hands and cut my wrists
you cut my throat with all your lies
you bled this heart dry
and burnt all my feeling
now i am blank without any meaning

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-08-04 07:26:57]
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Re: bled me dry (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:06:22 AM AEST
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One of your better writes. Id also like to add that it is harder to forgive than it is to forget. Once you allow yourself to forgive, the forgetting part is a piece of cake. Take care

Kimberly :)

Re: bled me dry (User Rating: 1 )
by A_Corseted_Heart on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:43:37 AM AEST
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A very good piece of work. Speaks of things I know all too well.

Our mind's self-preserving logic tells us to forget, but the demon of anguish... One of our souls most powerful minion... Will always dwell in the heart, keeping track of all the cuts and cracks...

~*Aurora*~

Re: bled me dry (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:27:56 AM AEST
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a very angry poem, it is good to get it out on paper , a good write,

pixie xx

Re: bled me dry (User Rating: 1 )
by Evanescencefreak on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 02:44:37 PM AEST
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I really felt it, and it was scarry. I dont understand this poem but I still find myself likeing it. I dont think well done sounds right so I dont know, how about keep writing.

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