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Array ( [sid] => 58787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A little secret [time] => 2004-08-03 23:43:03 [hometext] => How I Feel Everyday [bodytext] => She builds a wall so no one knows,
as the pain inside her slowly grows.
She knows not exactly what to do,
these fears and tears are nothing new.
She's always smiling everyday,
her depression she can't just give away.
Tucking away her own little secret,
in a tiny little book is where she likes to keep it.
Her coping skills are not the best,
as her fight for happiness puts her to the test.
She tries to deal with her problems day-by-day,
her thoughts of suicide regularly get in her way.
She wishes that she could get rid of it all,
why does her life seem so pointless and dull?
Everything in general makes her go insane,
her daily findings only bring her to more pain.
Her parents do not have a single clue,
she thinks they don't care about what she might do.
She feels so confused, with nowhere to turn,
Not knowing about the lessons she will soon learn.
Her every thought gets twisted and mangled,
one day she will get everything untangled.
She then decides to pick up the phone,
it is at that very moment that she knows she's not alone. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 21 [informant] => secret-_girl_91 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A little secret

Contributed by secret-_girl_91 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

She builds a wall so no one knows,
as the pain inside her slowly grows.
She knows not exactly what to do,
these fears and tears are nothing new.
She's always smiling everyday,
her depression she can't just give away.
Tucking away her own little secret,
in a tiny little book is where she likes to keep it.
Her coping skills are not the best,
as her fight for happiness puts her to the test.
She tries to deal with her problems day-by-day,
her thoughts of suicide regularly get in her way.
She wishes that she could get rid of it all,
why does her life seem so pointless and dull?
Everything in general makes her go insane,
her daily findings only bring her to more pain.
Her parents do not have a single clue,
she thinks they don't care about what she might do.
She feels so confused, with nowhere to turn,
Not knowing about the lessons she will soon learn.
Her every thought gets twisted and mangled,
one day she will get everything untangled.
She then decides to pick up the phone,
it is at that very moment that she knows she's not alone.

Copyright © secret-_girl_91 ... [ 2004-08-03 23:43:03]
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Re: A little secret (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:50:30 PM AEST
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i can relate to this soo well...it is a great poem...excellent job...keep writing

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: A little secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:21:28 AM AEST
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awesome write. sometimes that is how i also feel. i hope there is someone with all of us, so we are not alone.

Re: A little secret (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 12:55:09 PM AEST
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tear down the wall and let your true feelings out. That way nothing can build within you until you finally give in and explode.

Be True,
zenmind

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