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Crying Eyes
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:42:39 PM in AEST
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Look into my crying eyes
While you fill me with all your lies
Tell me you love me and that you care
Tell me you need me and that youll always be there
Look into my dying soul
Youre killing me slowly, not as a whole
From the inside out, youre tearing me apart
Youve managed to break my dying heart
Cant you tell your hurting me
Or are you just too busy to see
Youve never given me a reason to live
You had absolutely nothing to give
So why was it that I loved you so
What is it that I have to show
Only over a hundred scars
At least you left behind the stars
Everything else youve taken from me
You even managed to take my dignity
God, how dumb could I have been
Your love is like the deadliest sin
So Im leaving now, before you take any more
Youve already left me aching and sore
So goodbye, now and forever
I dont want to see you again, not ever
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Re: Crying Eyes
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by secret-_girl_91 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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Your poetry is very touching and i like it alot.keep writing
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Re: Crying Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:04:55 AM AEST
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It is plain to see the hurt through your words in your world. You emote effectively, and this is nice to read.
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Re: Crying Eyes
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:07:04 AM AEST
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your poem is crystal clear..the best thing is to forget the past...this is well written..keep writing on.. venkat
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