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Array ( [sid] => 58772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Vice [time] => 2004-08-03 22:42:39 [hometext] => Just something silly...But true!! [bodytext] =>

I smoke when I wake up.
I smoke before I bed.
I smoke throughout the day.
I’ll probably smoke until I’m dead.
My son he says to quit,
but my doc she says no way.
Anti depressant properties,
they turn my nights to day.
I love my little cigarettes.
Yes, I love them very much.
I take them with me everywhere.
I suppose they’re called a crutch.
But cancer is a major risk,
and heart disease is too.
Still I need my little cigarettes,
so what am I to do?

~Cage~ [comments] => 5 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TwistedCage [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
My Vice

Contributed by TwistedCage on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:42:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops





I smoke when I wake up.
I smoke before I bed.
I smoke throughout the day.
I’ll probably smoke until I’m dead.
My son he says to quit,
but my doc she says no way.
Anti depressant properties,
they turn my nights to day.
I love my little cigarettes.
Yes, I love them very much.
I take them with me everywhere.
I suppose they’re called a crutch.
But cancer is a major risk,
and heart disease is too.
Still I need my little cigarettes,
so what am I to do?

~Cage~




Copyright © TwistedCage ... [ 2004-08-03 22:42:39]
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Re: My Vice (User Rating: 1 )
by thewordzwithin on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:25:41 PM AEST
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Your wrong. It's not so silly but it is so true. I can't stand Ciggies but I understand the addiction. Great form of expression. Holla Front!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Re: My Vice (User Rating: 1 )
by sammydid on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:12:07 PM AEST
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i agree. bad addiction... but understandable

-natalie


Re: My Vice (User Rating: 1 )
by pickledchrunchies on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:16:58 PM AEST
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BRAVO! both my parents and stepparents smoke and i HATE it....good poem, and good write


Re: My Vice (User Rating: 1 )
by HrMajestyUK on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 05:34:51 PM AEST
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Am so gonna have to memorise that so I can recite it next time I'm nagged at for smoking!


Re: My Vice (User Rating: 1 )
by StormyNites on Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:17:46 AM AEST
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Oh !!! I loved that poem !! So true about the die hard smokers..




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