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Array ( [sid] => 58524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Misc Emotion [time] => 2004-08-02 12:32:26 [hometext] => This poem is devoted to a once very important girl who just treat me like ****, well, no matter how many people ask me, this is what i will always think of you, i love your comments guys ; ) [bodytext] =>
hah, well, i guess you love me
the love i was so sure was real
that love is now a complete lie
so i now hate you, and everything about you

a massive scar
you tore in me
in my worst week
scar haunts me today

i went out of my way to make you smile
your pretty young face to gleam
bear down sun into my darkest days
to lift me from these eternal shadows

its all wrong
well, now it is
i loved you
now i hate you

i despise the fact i knew you
so much of lifes energy gone
all forgotten
how the **** could you be so ******* heartless!

a truth i guess
it lies within an enigma
dressed in lies
it beseeched my eyes

how could you be so insensitive
you knew i was 'weird' its the way iam
its the thing that you liked about me the most
the fact that your worse than me is worst of all

how, how, how
i dont know
i fail to understand
give me a call
mail me at least
you cant hide for-ever
because iam still in your heart

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Another Misc Emotion

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:32:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




hah, well, i guess you love me
the love i was so sure was real
that love is now a complete lie
so i now hate you, and everything about you

a massive scar
you tore in me
in my worst week
scar haunts me today

i went out of my way to make you smile
your pretty young face to gleam
bear down sun into my darkest days
to lift me from these eternal shadows

its all wrong
well, now it is
i loved you
now i hate you

i despise the fact i knew you
so much of lifes energy gone
all forgotten
how the **** could you be so ******* heartless!

a truth i guess
it lies within an enigma
dressed in lies
it beseeched my eyes

how could you be so insensitive
you knew i was 'weird' its the way iam
its the thing that you liked about me the most
the fact that your worse than me is worst of all

how, how, how
i dont know
i fail to understand
give me a call
mail me at least
you cant hide for-ever
because iam still in your heart





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Re: Another Misc Emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:36:55 PM AEST
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nice write, good job writing how you feel....


Re: Another Misc Emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST
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You got your point across well in this poem. Great writing.

Kimberly :)




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