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Name of the Game
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 08:02:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Well Ive lived now thru four seasons
and for each one heard a reason
when the reason was no season at all.
And it took a year to reckon
that it does no good to beckon
when to beckon is to reckon a fall.
I was watching flowers blossom
sitting down just playing possum
when a possum took my blossom away.
And the empty space Im feeling
has now left me believing
when believing keeps the feeling at bay.
Its a notion that Im getting
now the room is up for letting
when the letting and the gettings a treat.
Its the perfume of the laughter
and the honey that Im after
when the after makes the laughter so sweet.
G.B.A Somewheres in 1986
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MomentInTime
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2004-08-02 08:02:51]
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Re: Name of the Game
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by thumper on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 08:25:21 AM AEST
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Cute, short and sweet. Keep it up, I look forward to more of your writes. Oh, and welcome to YPDC.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Name of the Game
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by inoc on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:37:42 AM AEST
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I like the way this is written
pretty good actually better than good
its excellent |
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Re: Name of the Game
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:38:18 AM AEST
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Nice schematic. I hope all your future writes are as worthwhile as this one - gives me food for thought.
Thanks for sharing, and Welcome to YPDC. |
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Re: Name of the Game
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:38:33 AM AEST
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Nice schematic. I hope all your future writes are as worthwhile as this one - gives me food for thought.
Thanks for sharing, and Welcome to YPDC. |
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Re: Name of the Game
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by Kie on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:26:02 PM AEST
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You have made a great impression on me.
Witty, cute, cheeky & a one of a kind writing style.
This is the kind of poetry I beg to read!
Well done.
Kie |
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Re: Name of the Game
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:47:04 AM AEST
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| words well woven..beautiful poem..venkat |
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Re: Name of the Game
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:33:09 AM AEST
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Wow this is pretty good. Nicely written. And beautiful poetic abilities.
Kimberly :) |
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