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Array ( [sid] => 58429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When i'm not [time] => 2004-08-01 18:51:48 [hometext] => blah blah someone please help me!!!!!! [bodytext] => i know its not fare
what do i have to show
i really care
i guess i'll just have to go

its hard to sleep at night
all i hear is all the fights
that go on in my head
all alone in this bed

when i'm dead and gone
i know i'll never be alone
i've got you on the phone

for now i'm just gonna enjoy life
staring at this knife,i wanna
refrain myself from thinking of what
i should do with this knife,all ***** off

15 years gone by
i wanna die
sick of all these lies

when i'm dead and gone
i know i'll never be alone
i've got you on the phone

tell me what to do
you know whats best
and only you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 65 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

When i'm not

Contributed by savedbydeath on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

i know its not fare
what do i have to show
i really care
i guess i'll just have to go

its hard to sleep at night
all i hear is all the fights
that go on in my head
all alone in this bed

when i'm dead and gone
i know i'll never be alone
i've got you on the phone

for now i'm just gonna enjoy life
staring at this knife,i wanna
refrain myself from thinking of what
i should do with this knife,all ***** off

15 years gone by
i wanna die
sick of all these lies

when i'm dead and gone
i know i'll never be alone
i've got you on the phone

tell me what to do
you know whats best
and only you

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-08-01 18:51:48]
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Re: When i'm not (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:08:14 PM AEST
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Im sorry you feel this way. If you stay strong things will get better. You have to make things get better though for yourself. You cant wait for something to happen. Make something happen.

Good write.

Heartfilledblood

Re: When i'm not (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:24:00 PM AEST
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Very good write. It's ashamed that so many people have to go through something like that. But only they can make life better. Hope you can see the sun through the storm.

Re: When i'm not (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:29:57 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
One can feel your pain in this write.
sounds like u don't have a very good home life for some reason.
Kepp writing as it's healing before u know u will feel like writing something positive.
If u need a friend, emystar@msn.com
Luv, huggs, pryaers,
emy

Re: When i'm not (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 08:36:54 PM AEST
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sorry about the title guys its actually called "when i'm dead",thanx 4 the comments

savedbydeath

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