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Array ( [sid] => 58420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My wife and kids forever farewell. [time] => 2004-08-01 17:39:55 [hometext] => A kids parents divorced as a kid sees his step father in a unforgetable act that devestates everyone. Check it out tell me what you think please :) [bodytext] => Afraid to tell you face always a fright
You walk up the stairs the day still so bright
Bust open my door, "What did I do?"
"What I saw a big mistake, please lets bid this ado!"
"No for my wife my kids forever farewell."
"You destroyed my life now let me to you."
"Your the one who slept with your lover"
"Im sorry to say that he is my older brother!
You ripped my family apart
Now to turn and love one another"

You hurt my mom my sister and younger brother
Was it the drugs that made you love my older brother?
You both took E slept at your friends house
Mother sent me to check if you were up another blouse
Understand it was 3 o'clock
But you were out ready to ****
Well at least you met real dads son
Funny how you two were able to have such fun!

As I ran back tears in my eyes
I thought of what would happen when mommy says bye bye
No more of you no more abuse
Maybe mommy would finally become MY mommy

Now I find you finished them off
Mommy in the next room brother and sister with
"What about your lover, I mean my brother?"
"Shut up and let me think"
To bad you just blinked
Your life gone to the middle one in the bunch.


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My wife and kids forever farewell.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:39:55 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Afraid to tell you face always a fright
You walk up the stairs the day still so bright
Bust open my door, "What did I do?"
"What I saw a big mistake, please lets bid this ado!"
"No for my wife my kids forever farewell."
"You destroyed my life now let me to you."
"Your the one who slept with your lover"
"Im sorry to say that he is my older brother!
You ripped my family apart
Now to turn and love one another"

You hurt my mom my sister and younger brother
Was it the drugs that made you love my older brother?
You both took E slept at your friends house
Mother sent me to check if you were up another blouse
Understand it was 3 o'clock
But you were out ready to ****
Well at least you met real dads son
Funny how you two were able to have such fun!

As I ran back tears in my eyes
I thought of what would happen when mommy says bye bye
No more of you no more abuse
Maybe mommy would finally become MY mommy

Now I find you finished them off
Mommy in the next room brother and sister with
"What about your lover, I mean my brother?"
"Shut up and let me think"
To bad you just blinked
Your life gone to the middle one in the bunch.






Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-08-01 17:39:55]
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Re: My wife and kids forever farewell. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:27:27 PM AEST
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This needs a vast amount of tweaking. The storyline is good but it is too hard to read and doesn't really come together totally.

Rita


Re: My wife and kids forever farewell. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken921 on Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 06:54:03 AM AEST
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Wow !!!




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