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Delusional Dance Of Death
Contributed by
secretwind
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Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:46:48 AM in AEST
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Don't ask me no questions
just leave me alone
disaster is your master
common sense is unknown,
fresh is
that sinking feeling
but you are
delusion from the fall
off your wall...
under a false impression
that you are more than a shadow.
The fantasies never stop
you try to escape
by acting strange
after another body rock
you awake
still in pain,
Thinking
you that you are winning
as you
sit all alone
waiting by the phone...
distracted by the confusion
but you know
something is wrong.
finally seeing
and feeling like prey
got you walking the streets
with eyes openned wide,
round and round
you are spinning round
on a carousel ride.
concealing
what you are really feeling
as you
have fallen down again
and need a friend...
Don't ask me no questions
just leave me alone.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-07-31 02:46:48]
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Re: Delusional Dance Of Death
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:58:51 AM AEST
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self expalatory.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Delusional Dance Of Death
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:21:28 AM AEST
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very emotional and deep write, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Delusional Dance Of Death
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:24:04 AM AEST
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Captivating write. I like the style you used too. Great poem.
Kimberly :) |
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