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Array ( [sid] => 58259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Unreturned [time] => 2004-07-31 01:55:07 [hometext] => I wrote this because there is this lady I like, but it doesnt seem like she can ever care for me [bodytext] => She walks by so beautiful
In my head a never ending loop
With pictures of her in thought
My spirits never seem to droop

Her image emblazed in mind
Causes my breath to stop
When shes there
My heartbeat shall not drop

I know she thinks of me
I know she does care
But it seems like when she's arround
She'd rather not be there

I can't make it go away
I can't foget her
It makes life incoherent
It makes life a blur

I wish I could know
What she thinks of me
I wish I would know
If she thinks of me

Why must this be
Why is this so
In stories it all ends happy
This isn't a fairy tale though

Why can't she do it;
Return my feelings
Now thoughts of her
Leave me bleeding

With my soul exposed
My heart continues to bleed
Never to have the love returned
That it does need [comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 22 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Love Unreturned

Contributed by kyletycz on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She walks by so beautiful
In my head a never ending loop
With pictures of her in thought
My spirits never seem to droop

Her image emblazed in mind
Causes my breath to stop
When shes there
My heartbeat shall not drop

I know she thinks of me
I know she does care
But it seems like when she's arround
She'd rather not be there

I can't make it go away
I can't foget her
It makes life incoherent
It makes life a blur

I wish I could know
What she thinks of me
I wish I would know
If she thinks of me

Why must this be
Why is this so
In stories it all ends happy
This isn't a fairy tale though

Why can't she do it;
Return my feelings
Now thoughts of her
Leave me bleeding

With my soul exposed
My heart continues to bleed
Never to have the love returned
That it does need

Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-07-31 01:55:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:21:58 AM AEST
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Good poetry.. venkat

Re: Love Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by emeraldeyes on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:56:33 AM AEST
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so sad...nicely written.

Re: Love Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 05:42:00 AM AEST
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Well done.... Lovely work...Best wishes.....
Jenni

Re: Love Unreturned (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:31:02 AM AEST
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It's good to poor you heart out, especially on paper. Very well written poem. take care!

Kimberly :)

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