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Array ( [sid] => 5825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Black Sheep [time] => 2002-10-29 15:40:00 [hometext] => for sam... [bodytext] => your SUICIDE chamber, your room,
where i would lay my head on your stomach
and BELIEVE that nothing would separate us
no, not even DEATH
would sever the BOND that us two lonely kids had.
of course i was so blatantly STUPID
and unable to see what you really were
underneath the punk leather jacket
and the gallons of hair gel
there was ANGER in your words
anger in your WORLD
you were SICK OF IT ALL
and however i cared
it never seemed to break through the self-hate

so you DIED that evening
one rainy night in july
ten days before my birthday
caressing your NEEDLE
your HEROIN LOVE
you wouldn't think twice about these brown eyes
and whether or not they'd cry at your funeral.

i didn't go
i was too afraid i'd yell at you
for being a JERK and leaving me here...
without taking me with you
when you went to better places

you were the BLACK SHEEP...
always a rebel
until the day you laid down
just like every other heartbroken fool
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Blue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Black Sheep

Contributed by Blue on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

your SUICIDE chamber, your room,
where i would lay my head on your stomach
and BELIEVE that nothing would separate us
no, not even DEATH
would sever the BOND that us two lonely kids had.
of course i was so blatantly STUPID
and unable to see what you really were
underneath the punk leather jacket
and the gallons of hair gel
there was ANGER in your words
anger in your WORLD
you were SICK OF IT ALL
and however i cared
it never seemed to break through the self-hate

so you DIED that evening
one rainy night in july
ten days before my birthday
caressing your NEEDLE
your HEROIN LOVE
you wouldn't think twice about these brown eyes
and whether or not they'd cry at your funeral.

i didn't go
i was too afraid i'd yell at you
for being a JERK and leaving me here...
without taking me with you
when you went to better places

you were the BLACK SHEEP...
always a rebel
until the day you laid down
just like every other heartbroken fool

Copyright © Blue ... [ 2002-10-29 15:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Black Sheep (User Rating: 1 )
by Knowledge on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:21:28 AM AEST
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I can't relate to this, but don't be mad at your friend. Please. She's gone...she deserves for people to think of the best about her. Remember her always.

-Knowledge

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