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Array ( [sid] => 58239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Suicide [time] => 2004-07-30 21:24:59 [hometext] => Song. [bodytext] => [ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

You told me to be quiet as you offered me your hand
Promised to lead me from all my sorrow and decay
You said “Look into my eyes and you will understand
But like the coward you know I am, I turned and looked away
I turned my back on you and all you have to provide
Returning to my desolate prison and my silent suicide

Feeling like I’m the one to blame
For all your terrible grief
I’ll cry and hang my head in shame
And pray for sweet relief

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

You never even cared for me, not from the very start
Only wanted me gone, you prayed that I would cease
Unwind your barbed wire from my bitter, aching heart
And leave me to find salvation in my sweet release

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

I’ll only let you down
I will make you hurt
I’ll watch your lonely little frown
As they cover me in dirt

Who do I try and fool?
I’ll never make you ache
Unlike you, your words, so cruel
My bleeding soul, they break

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

I turned and looked away, now
Nothing but skeletons, there’ll be
You never quite understood, how
Your words were the only thing to save me

Your eyes seemed to see right through my own
Looked into my very soul, that lies
Hidden, beneath tissue and bone
Anxiously awaiting our last goodbyes

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

I’ll leave my note, just for you
Written and signed in red
Ending in “Your little girl blue,
All the better that she’s dead,

You never even cared for me, not from the very start
Only wanted me gone, you prayed that I would cease
Unwind your barbed wire from my bitter, aching heart
And leave me to find salvation in my sweet release

You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide.
” [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 36 [informant] => blackmarker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Silent Suicide

Contributed by blackmarker on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

You told me to be quiet as you offered me your hand
Promised to lead me from all my sorrow and decay
You said “Look into my eyes and you will understand
But like the coward you know I am, I turned and looked away
I turned my back on you and all you have to provide
Returning to my desolate prison and my silent suicide

Feeling like I’m the one to blame
For all your terrible grief
I’ll cry and hang my head in shame
And pray for sweet relief

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

You never even cared for me, not from the very start
Only wanted me gone, you prayed that I would cease
Unwind your barbed wire from my bitter, aching heart
And leave me to find salvation in my sweet release

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

I’ll only let you down
I will make you hurt
I’ll watch your lonely little frown
As they cover me in dirt

Who do I try and fool?
I’ll never make you ache
Unlike you, your words, so cruel
My bleeding soul, they break

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

I turned and looked away, now
Nothing but skeletons, there’ll be
You never quite understood, how
Your words were the only thing to save me

Your eyes seemed to see right through my own
Looked into my very soul, that lies
Hidden, beneath tissue and bone
Anxiously awaiting our last goodbyes

[ Chorus ]
You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide

I’ll leave my note, just for you
Written and signed in red
Ending in “Your little girl blue,
All the better that she’s dead,

You never even cared for me, not from the very start
Only wanted me gone, you prayed that I would cease
Unwind your barbed wire from my bitter, aching heart
And leave me to find salvation in my sweet release

You don’t want to save me from my lonely confine
Ignore me and my hushed homicide
You don’t want to save me from what’s me and mine
Ignore me and my silent suicide.




Copyright © blackmarker ... [ 2004-07-30 21:24:59]
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Re: Silent Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Dopetherapy on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:59:33 AM AEST
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The song is deep and meaningful and i could relate to it. Kick ass and i hope to read another, Keep it up.


Re: Silent Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:33:24 PM AEST
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How on earth am i only the second person to comment on this? I can't be only the second to have read it.
This is absolutely incredible. I can relate to it quite a bit, and the whole rhythm, the entire song is beautiful.. wish i could hear it..
amazing, wow....
charlotte x_x_x


Re: Silent Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:54:56 PM AEST
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Drenched in emotion and passion! Very wonderful write.

Laurie




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