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Array ( [sid] => 58233 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Erased Childhood [time] => 2004-07-30 20:45:06 [hometext] => It's time to forget the past! [bodytext] => ***
Bloodshot eyes
Unesessary cries
Vermilion colored face
A complete disgrace
All this anxiety
Forever scars me
My mind is always cloudy
I have a great ambition to succeed
May this heart of mine
Never again bleed
My life lies there
In the palm of my hand
And all I can do is stare
With this terrifyed glare
So many roads to choose from
And I can only select one
I feel so unwanted
Life got so complicated
Completely misunderstood
dreadful childhood
Now I'm getting older
All I need now is closure
Never again will I
Sulk in my past
It's time for me to tell it goodbye
At last
I've finally erased
My childhood past! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 21 [informant] => WestCPunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Erased Childhood

Contributed by WestCPunk on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



***
Bloodshot eyes
Unesessary cries
Vermilion colored face
A complete disgrace
All this anxiety
Forever scars me
My mind is always cloudy
I have a great ambition to succeed
May this heart of mine
Never again bleed
My life lies there
In the palm of my hand
And all I can do is stare
With this terrifyed glare
So many roads to choose from
And I can only select one
I feel so unwanted
Life got so complicated
Completely misunderstood
dreadful childhood
Now I'm getting older
All I need now is closure
Never again will I
Sulk in my past
It's time for me to tell it goodbye
At last
I've finally erased
My childhood past!




Copyright © WestCPunk ... [ 2004-07-30 20:45:06]
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Re: Erased Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:53:42 PM AEST
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Excellent poem..... you are a tremendeous poet!


Re: Erased Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:06:08 PM AEST
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I knew it! I knew I was right. You are far more intelligent than you have let anyone know. Dang, I love being right! lol

Rita


Re: Erased Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:42:26 AM AEST
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very sharp expression.. very well written poem..venkat




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