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Array ( [sid] => 58202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rail Road Tracks [time] => 2004-07-30 14:26:13 [hometext] => a song I wrote, reflecting on myself and a guy I know named [bodytext] => When he goes to his Pusher
Everything he finds
A place for his heart
A place for his mind
Down to the tracks
Slowly he walks
He finds himself at,
At the Pawn Shop
With the wind in the night
The RAVEN to his back
Once again,
In and out
He follows his tracks.

Light the Bowl (3)
Follow your tracks

Tracks around the city
He taught her to follow
On mistake she came about him
Now she can't breathe with out him
She began to loose her life
She finds it all at the Pusher hands
Most of the time for free
But both hands are staind
In this sin City
The tracks in her mind
The tracks on her arm
Suffocating in his beautiful charm
So little for so much harm.

Turn off the Bowl
Empty the Bowl
Turn off the Bowl
Disappearing Tracks..... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 66 [informant] => Alina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Rail Road Tracks

Contributed by Alina on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

When he goes to his Pusher
Everything he finds
A place for his heart
A place for his mind
Down to the tracks
Slowly he walks
He finds himself at,
At the Pawn Shop
With the wind in the night
The RAVEN to his back
Once again,
In and out
He follows his tracks.

Light the Bowl (3)
Follow your tracks

Tracks around the city
He taught her to follow
On mistake she came about him
Now she can't breathe with out him
She began to loose her life
She finds it all at the Pusher hands
Most of the time for free
But both hands are staind
In this sin City
The tracks in her mind
The tracks on her arm
Suffocating in his beautiful charm
So little for so much harm.

Turn off the Bowl
Empty the Bowl
Turn off the Bowl
Disappearing Tracks.....

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-07-30 14:26:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:18:22 PM AEST
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i love this write!!! beautiful imagery and descriptions. the message is mysterious at first but clear in the end. keep writing, i look forward to it. if you ever need to talk, IM me.
Brynna

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by pvd on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:23:58 PM AEST
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I love the content and subject of this poem. Check spelling. Keep writing it's better than dope.
PVD

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:39:36 PM AEST
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mysterious,well written, and with a good meaning.excellent job!
~vermillion~

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:05:09 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, no other words to describe it
~bttrfly~

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:29:08 PM AEST
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great song.

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:38:57 PM AEST
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nice, i like it alot.

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:21:51 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE IM SURE IT WILL HAVE GREAT IMPACT ON A LOT OF PEOPLE - KEEP IT UP

Re: Rail Road Tracks (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:14:00 AM AEST
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awesome

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