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We told each other we would never fall for one another,
We should never become lovers.
Then you tell me you do really love me.
This does not bother me,
Though I love you just as a mate,
Yet now at a later date.
I have become hugely shocked.
My heart has become unlocked.
I to hear myself uttering the words I love you.
Yet it is our friendship that we value.
Mark you are a wonderful mate,
May be you would even make a much better date.
I hope this is not too much,
I just can’t wait to feel our first touch.

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First touch

Contributed by little_genna on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:25:46 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

We told each other we would never fall for one another,
We should never become lovers.
Then you tell me you do really love me.
This does not bother me,
Though I love you just as a mate,
Yet now at a later date.
I have become hugely shocked.
My heart has become unlocked.
I to hear myself uttering the words I love you.
Yet it is our friendship that we value.
Mark you are a wonderful mate,
May be you would even make a much better date.
I hope this is not too much,
I just can’t wait to feel our first touch.

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-07-30 07:25:46]
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Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:53:19 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sweet.... Cherish your friendship.... and take things slowly.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by srsuckow on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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Moving beyond friendship is scary (and exciting)!! Good luck!

Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Britty on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:18:51 AM AEST
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aww this is really good! i loved it

Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:47:48 AM AEST
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Very sweet poem... You should let him read it. take care...

Kimberly :)

Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:24:48 PM AEST
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Awwww I wish you and Mark all the best, but take baby steps, dont rush things and they will work out fine....*hugs you*

takecare

pixie xx

Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:17:11 PM AEST
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awww... so sweet!!! best wishes to you:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: First touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Snapz on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:46:13 PM AEST
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huni dont worry about it effecting our friendship if we dont want it to it wont, we've been close since we started speaking an although i never thought ud feel like this or tht i wud im fine with it and woteva u want 2do from now is fine by me. Thnx 4 tellin me now though an im glad its artistic rather than just said i always prefer ur writin im poetry form its relaxing. Neway no 2 the point i love u an i love this poem btw wot are we doing about tht whole marriage thingy tht we went on about ? love mark (Snapz)

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