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Only having heartlessness
Except for the loneliness
Living in the emptiness
You spread them around
Bringing everyone down
Because you couldn't handle
What made you frown
In your sorrows you drown

Only heartlessness
Living with emptiness
You couldn't accept
That you weren't liked by anyone
So you brought them down
Crashing to the ground
And because of you they drown
In the sorrows you have found

In your perfect world
Problems never occur
In your perfect life
You never encounter strife
In your perfect mind
You are always right
Even when truth says otherwise

In spite of everything
You bring everyone down
Because you live in the reality
Where you ruin all hope
When you speak each word
Everyone drowns in sorrow
Because you live in the world

They live in the abyss
That you created for them
In their sorrows they live
Forgetting to breathe
And drown in emptiness

Your heartlessness never dies
They died never living their life
Because emptiness filled the abyss
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Heartlessness Never Dies

Contributed by Essentially9 on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:28:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Heartlessness Never Dies

Only having heartlessness
Except for the loneliness
Living in the emptiness
You spread them around
Bringing everyone down
Because you couldn't handle
What made you frown
In your sorrows you drown

Only heartlessness
Living with emptiness
You couldn't accept
That you weren't liked by anyone
So you brought them down
Crashing to the ground
And because of you they drown
In the sorrows you have found

In your perfect world
Problems never occur
In your perfect life
You never encounter strife
In your perfect mind
You are always right
Even when truth says otherwise

In spite of everything
You bring everyone down
Because you live in the reality
Where you ruin all hope
When you speak each word
Everyone drowns in sorrow
Because you live in the world

They live in the abyss
That you created for them
In their sorrows they live
Forgetting to breathe
And drown in emptiness

Your heartlessness never dies
They died never living their life
Because emptiness filled the abyss
One day at a time

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-07-29 21:28:09]
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Re: Heartlessness Never Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:45:01 PM AEST
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so much non-caring in the world. super write.

the voice

Re: Heartlessness Never Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Joanna on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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oh man! where you get this stuff from?
I've got to say I can't even show that emotion on one of the tragedy poems I've written, but you're good at it, the best I've seen so far. You bring out a sense of Edgar Allen Poe to the extreme that gives me chills.
I like it- keep it up

Re: Heartlessness Never Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:21:05 PM AEST
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excellent poem! A true, vivid and painful picture of self-centerdness... may God cleanse me of it

Re: Heartlessness Never Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by nexxa on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:36:03 AM AEST
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aww very nice write wee one and hits way to close to home for comfort I am only glad I didnt have to learn these hard lessons at such an early age....
Well done :)
Nexxa

Re: Heartlessness Never Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:39:13 AM AEST
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very true write, wonderful flow and expression used here,

pixie xx

Re: Heartlessness Never Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:20:10 PM AEST
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This is a really great write....awesome job!

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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