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Hell
Contributed by
black_angel
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:58:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Schitzophrenic ****
Could use a little luck
Hears the devil's call
From the depths of hell
Death at the gates
And chaos in the streets
Unexpected dates
Of the psycho's kill
Homicidal freak
Gets pleasure out of pain
Tortures the weak
Steals a cripple's cane
Flames in the brain
And chills from the heart
Depends on the rain
To do its part
Screwed up teen
Would love to be the queen
Of the boy's wet dreams
Gettin' wealth from filth
Dealing in the streets
Sex at the peak
Faking to pleasure
To hear the screams
Copyright ©
black_angel
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2004-07-29 07:58:13]
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Re: Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:42:58 PM AEST
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| this was very interesting and nicely suggestive towards the end.--Mothy |
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Re: Hell
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by auura on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 01:38:00 PM AEST
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| i liked it.......its a definate example of dark poetry, but the darkest thing about it is that it's all true. |
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