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[aid] => mick
[title] => I Want Out
[time] => 2004-07-28 23:17:06
[hometext] => I dont know how much more i can take....i hope you like it....please comment!!! : (
[bodytext] => People say suicide isn’t the way out
By lately it seems like the only way
Life just doesn’t seem worth it
I have no reason to stay
Friends are just a hassle
My family could care less
Love is just too painful
My life is just a mess
All that I want
Are the things I had before
I just want to go back
To when life meant so much more
I want to return to my innocence
Where life was black and white
Before gray was introduced
When the sun was always bright
But that is only in my dreams now
So I’ll slip into a constant dream
Never to be awaken again
I’m now going to the final extreme
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[counter] => 166
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[informant] => CrimsonTears
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[ratings] => 2
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[topicname] => Suicide
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I Want Out
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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People say suicide isn’t the way out
By lately it seems like the only way
Life just doesn’t seem worth it
I have no reason to stay
Friends are just a hassle
My family could care less
Love is just too painful
My life is just a mess
All that I want
Are the things I had before
I just want to go back
To when life meant so much more
I want to return to my innocence
Where life was black and white
Before gray was introduced
When the sun was always bright
But that is only in my dreams now
So I’ll slip into a constant dream
Never to be awaken again
I’m now going to the final extreme
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-07-28 23:17:06]
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Re: I Want Out
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:26:24 PM AEST
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Good poem, you've expressed really well how most of us feel at times just please don't go to the final extreme!.
wildejohnny.
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Re: I Want Out
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:48:28 PM AEST
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It may not seem like it now but trust me your life will get better. I've been depressed since i was 10 years old. I never knew what the reason for living was. There had to be a reason why God kept me on this earth. I just realized this past year why. I was put on this earth to give birth to two beautiful babies and marry the man of my dreams. I know it seems like a fairy tale but it can happen and it will if you just wait it out to see. Good Luck! Don't do anything you'll regret later.
*Natalie* |
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Re: I Want Out
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:10:10 AM AEST
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| Very well express poem.........good write... |
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Re: I Want Out
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:39:27 AM AEST
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It's easy to die but takes much courage to live.
Hang tuff as I'm sure u can find something to be thankfull for.
huggs, luv, prayers,
emy |
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Re: I Want Out
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:35:39 AM AEST
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i used to see no other way out other than suicide and I can tell you i am so very glad that my last attempt didnt work, because I would be missing so much, plus all the pain I would have left my family with wouldnt have been fair., life is a pain, but keep strong, keep writing. there are people here (like me) who fully understand what you are feeling and going through.... great write,
takecare of yourself
pixie xx |
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Re: I Want Out
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:04:46 AM AEST
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Suicide poems always scares me. This is a very good poem, and explained well. I used to be so sad when I realized I was stepping into the real world. Highschool, when i was 14 going through 18 years of age was my happier time, but I realized we all have to grow up and change with the times, or we're going to be lost and stuck within the past. I hope that you can overcome your sadness.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: I Want Out
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:07:38 PM AEST
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I agree, all this would to nice..
to go back in time
but its impossible
which is why you have to sort things out now
i say this to myself
forget the past
live in the now
wait for the future
Things that are bad, can be made good
take a look at this link
http://www.usdoctor.com/pms.htm |
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Re: I Want Out
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:11:07 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem. Just please dont ever go and hurt yourself. Sucicide is not the way out. This comes from experience. I was once sucidal and almost went through with it but thank God above my mom came home early from work and got to me before i could go through with it. It is not worth seeing the look on your parents and rest of your family's faces when/if they find out you turned to sucicide. I am not trying to preach or anything to you I just dont want you to go through what I went through!
love~n~smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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