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As if they're made of cold, cold steel
A simple kiss like a turnin' key
A little click and the lock's on me
Can't move my arms, can't lift my hands
I won't admit to where I am
But I know baby, I'm in chains
I pretend I can always leave
Free to go whenever I please
But then the sound of my desperate calls
Echo off these dungeon walls
I've crossed the line from mad to sane
A thousand times and back again
I love you baby, I'm in chains
Should have known passing through the gate
That once inside I could not escape
I never thought this could happen to me
Never thought this is where I'd be
Never thought this could happen to me
I’m in chains.
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I'm in...

Contributed by Kiz on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Your arms are warm but they make me feel
As if they're made of cold, cold steel
A simple kiss like a turnin' key
A little click and the lock's on me
Can't move my arms, can't lift my hands
I won't admit to where I am
But I know baby, I'm in chains
I pretend I can always leave
Free to go whenever I please
But then the sound of my desperate calls
Echo off these dungeon walls
I've crossed the line from mad to sane
A thousand times and back again
I love you baby, I'm in chains
Should have known passing through the gate
That once inside I could not escape
I never thought this could happen to me
Never thought this is where I'd be
Never thought this could happen to me
I’m in chains.

Copyright Â© Kiz ... [ 2002-10-29 06:00:00]
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Re: I'm in... (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:04:45 AM AEST
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a little twist to answer the question on love it seems this is... this is a love poem, yet yut in chains. doesn't seem like the greatest place to be. man i hope that you don't stay in chains... good write! kudos! ;0) -daniel

Re: I'm in... (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:23:25 AM AEST
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Very clear on how you feel here
Hope you don't stay in this place
very long, it can eat you up and swallow
you whole. Very good write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: I'm in... (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:58:41 AM AEST
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good write, thanks for sharing,

Re: I'm in... (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:59:26 AM AEST
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Ha Ha! You got got. I liked this poem. It reminded me of the true beauty held within love. It made me smile. 4.29 on the Nortiscale

Re: I'm in... (User Rating: 1 )
by rockshv on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:21:45 AM AEST
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Great writing!!! thanks for the feedback...

im here if u ever wanna talk

;O)

kita

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