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[aid] => Mick
[title] => My Song Will Still Live On
[time] => 2002-10-28 16:00:00
[hometext] => I didn't know what to put this under. PLEASE READ THIS, and comment...
[bodytext] => If tomorrow dawns
And my soul has gone and fled,
Leaving all of you, my friends,
Alone with grief and dread,
I want to leave this memoir
Solely, just for you,
Remember how I used to sing,
Didn't matter if the sky was gray or blue,
Please remember the life I led,
Not the sickness that I fought,
And please remember all the smiles I had,
Not the tears you caught.
Please remember me as a strong,
Capable, loving person, not one full of fear,
Please remember my loving friends
That I held each one of you so dear.
I know that if tomorrow comes,
You may blame yourselves,
But please remember that each of us must face,
Our hand that life has dealt.
Please forgive me for not fighting,
And for moving on,
But as long as you remember me,
My song will still live on.
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[ratings] => 9
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => MiscPoems
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My Song Will Still Live On
Contributed by
ginsdance
on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If tomorrow dawns
And my soul has gone and fled,
Leaving all of you, my friends,
Alone with grief and dread,
I want to leave this memoir
Solely, just for you,
Remember how I used to sing,
Didn't matter if the sky was gray or blue,
Please remember the life I led,
Not the sickness that I fought,
And please remember all the smiles I had,
Not the tears you caught.
Please remember me as a strong,
Capable, loving person, not one full of fear,
Please remember my loving friends
That I held each one of you so dear.
I know that if tomorrow comes,
You may blame yourselves,
But please remember that each of us must face,
Our hand that life has dealt.
Please forgive me for not fighting,
And for moving on,
But as long as you remember me,
My song will still live on.
Copyright ©
ginsdance
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2002-10-28 16:00:00]
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by OreO on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 04:07:17 PM AEST
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This is a very beautifully
written poem, i really enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by aernby on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:02:39 PM AEST
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...and so it shall ...
good write ... |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:00:09 PM AEST
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| Good poem, and I'd say it would fit under Life Poetry. |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:02:21 PM AEST
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Great write ... hope you're not thinking of anything silly now .... forget him ....
Beautiful words |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by Fwog on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:47:33 PM AEST
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Whoa Ginnie!
Where are you going with this,
Please, hold on to you for all our sakes.
Clock in Ginnie we need to hear from you.
A beautiful poem, but you've frightened me.
Come on sign in now..... |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:14:41 PM AEST
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| Wow I really thought this fit under SAD! It really touch me! Chin up! Christina |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by amos on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:06:56 AM AEST
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| I think these could go as song lyrics..but what do I know. Having talked to you just the other day online, I found you to be a very interesting person..this can justify that. Great work. |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by amos on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:07:00 AM AEST
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| I think these could go as song lyrics..but what do I know. Having talked to you just the other day online, I found you to be a very interesting person..this can justify that. Great work. |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 05:52:11 AM AEST
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very beautiful,truly enjoyed this one.
hang in there gins
jackee_line |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:49:26 AM AEST
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Phew Ginnie Gin,
Sure glad tomorrow never comes!
I want you to continue posting here, and I feel totally sure that I'm not alone with that!
This, as always, if full of feeling from your dancing thoughts;-) It's really sad, and very well written again!
Keep it up young lady.
With love
Dean;-)
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:30:13 AM AEST
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Sorry, I want, don't get!
I meant "I would like very much for you to continue posting here!"
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 01:17:39 PM AEST
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This is a great write gin, but if I wasn't talking to you online as I'm posting this comment... I might think you were planning something, but I know you're smarter and stronger than that.
Curtis |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 03:00:45 PM AEST
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Sorry if I scared any of you. That wasn't my intention at all. I just needed to vent a bit of "doom" or "premonition". Kind of like when I wrote "Just in Case"...
Again, I'm sorry if I scared any of you! Thank you for your wonderful comments. It's so nice to know that so many of you care!
Gin |
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Re: My Song Will Still Live On
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by Chicken on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:14:48 AM AEST
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| Sobs....it's real good |
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