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Array ( [sid] => 57774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => That Moment [time] => 2004-07-27 13:29:06 [hometext] => Just some thought of 'the moment'.. when you fall in love... I was reminiscing when it happened to me.. how cruel can fate sometimes be.. never ever wish for something for you might get it, I know I did.. maybe the next time will make more sense. If ever! [bodytext] => A second before now,
A minute after then,
How can you ever know,
That magic moment when.

All things fall into place,
When she walks into view,
My world spins in a daze,
My heart beats all askew.

Is it that lovely face,
Or that sweet sweet smell of her,
That lovely voice that says,
"Hello" as if a purr.

Before I never knew,
But now I always dream,
No one can be as you,
As perfect as I deem.

Is love truly as blind,
For indeed I have seen more,
But all that my heart now finds,
Is your face that I adore.

How can I define,
This love that sparks in turn,
Is this that tale through time,
The love that ever burns.

What fate has bound to me,
That moment when fate has willed,
A dream of what could be,
A hope that finds me still.

Whenever it came by,
Whatever is the cause,
It's too late to wonder why,
Once happened I am lost. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

That Moment

Contributed by Baronhawk on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:29:06 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A second before now,
A minute after then,
How can you ever know,
That magic moment when.

All things fall into place,
When she walks into view,
My world spins in a daze,
My heart beats all askew.

Is it that lovely face,
Or that sweet sweet smell of her,
That lovely voice that says,
"Hello" as if a purr.

Before I never knew,
But now I always dream,
No one can be as you,
As perfect as I deem.

Is love truly as blind,
For indeed I have seen more,
But all that my heart now finds,
Is your face that I adore.

How can I define,
This love that sparks in turn,
Is this that tale through time,
The love that ever burns.

What fate has bound to me,
That moment when fate has willed,
A dream of what could be,
A hope that finds me still.

Whenever it came by,
Whatever is the cause,
It's too late to wonder why,
Once happened I am lost.

Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2004-07-27 13:29:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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A very special moment indeed!
By your comment it would seem that things didn't work out, but don't close the door!
Good flow and well done!

Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:01:52 PM AEST
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What a rush that feeling is!...this is an awesome verse that tells of that breathless moment. Beautifully written.

WinterFawn

Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:50:05 PM AEST
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beautiful just beautiful great job.

Brandy

Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:52:03 PM AEST
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Yes, it is a moment that lives in memory forever. It may be just in the past now, but love is always waiting for you when you least expect it. You will have another 'moment'. Maybe not exactly the same, but another you will never forget.

Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:09:34 AM AEST
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such sweet magical moments ever occur in our lives..beautifully written.. venkat

Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 06:50:46 PM AEST
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beautiful in style, flow and well woven words, very sweet too:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: That Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:18:45 PM AEST
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I never see you here anymore so I was delighted to see that you had posted again!

Your poem is beautiful and wistful.

Baron you live in a exotic locale in a place full of beautiful women. It can happen again and i'm going to send strong wishes your way that you find the happiness you deserve.

Hope and faith can take you a long way if you will only believe.

Keep writing!

Kie

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