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Array ( [sid] => 57740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-07-27 07:53:43 [hometext] => this poem is about a deep loss that happened to me a while back . [bodytext] => Tears roll down my cheeks,
Head bowed in sorrow.
Disbelief in my thoughts,
What i believe in taken away.

Rain tapping on my window,
Cold and dull,the sky is grey.
Wind howling outside,
Such a bleak day it is.

My sorrow overruns my mind,
My dreams taken away from me.
Held prisoner,my thoughts run wild,
What can i say?what can i do?

The love i had has dissappeared,
All alone standing here,
The tears still rolling down my cheeks,
Down into the darkness i plumit.

Once i was so happy,so content,
But now i have no feelings.
No thoughts of happiness,
Just an empty shell of a person.

I wish for happiness i once had,
The joy,the smiles and the laughter.
But now they are all but a dream i once had,
How could someone have such deep sorrow.

I'm all alone now trapped my myself,
No-one can help me it's gone too far.
My own fault,why did'nt i say "don't go"
But i did'nt my mistake,i will live with it.

If only i could go back,
and say all the right things.
But i can't,and even if i could ,
Would i change anything?

I have to live with what i have done,
Face the consequences of my actions.
I should of thought things through,
But i did'nt and this is my sentance.

Standing here alone with nothing,
But my sorrow and despair.
My life in shattered pieces,
Living alone,being alone,my mind alone,
Nothing can be repaired
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Alone

Contributed by spookyfox on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:53:43 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Tears roll down my cheeks,
Head bowed in sorrow.
Disbelief in my thoughts,
What i believe in taken away.

Rain tapping on my window,
Cold and dull,the sky is grey.
Wind howling outside,
Such a bleak day it is.

My sorrow overruns my mind,
My dreams taken away from me.
Held prisoner,my thoughts run wild,
What can i say?what can i do?

The love i had has dissappeared,
All alone standing here,
The tears still rolling down my cheeks,
Down into the darkness i plumit.

Once i was so happy,so content,
But now i have no feelings.
No thoughts of happiness,
Just an empty shell of a person.

I wish for happiness i once had,
The joy,the smiles and the laughter.
But now they are all but a dream i once had,
How could someone have such deep sorrow.

I'm all alone now trapped my myself,
No-one can help me it's gone too far.
My own fault,why did'nt i say "don't go"
But i did'nt my mistake,i will live with it.

If only i could go back,
and say all the right things.
But i can't,and even if i could ,
Would i change anything?

I have to live with what i have done,
Face the consequences of my actions.
I should of thought things through,
But i did'nt and this is my sentance.

Standing here alone with nothing,
But my sorrow and despair.
My life in shattered pieces,
Living alone,being alone,my mind alone,
Nothing can be repaired




Copyright © spookyfox ... [ 2004-07-27 07:53:43]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:27:48 AM AEST
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Very sad but descriptive poem. We've all felt this way I'm sure. I hope you can pick back up the pieces.

Kimberly


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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So sad...

please comment on my work too
summer




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