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Array ( [sid] => 57662 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => feather of an angel [time] => 2004-07-26 16:53:10 [hometext] => your gardian angel...i dont know if many people believe in fate and angels...and obviously God....but i do...and i believe she watches over me and you every night and day...till we pass away....(oh my gosh im crying as i write it!lol) [bodytext] => she smiles happily
and watches your eyes widen
she reaches out for you
and holds your hand
you cry because you are lifted up far away from her
and given to outstreched arms
you forgot her
and focus on this body
she is smiling also
happy
so you let out a babble
you do not understand
but you forgot the other women
and laugh happily
in the arms of your mother...
as you grow up
she comes back for visits
she watches you
as you fall over when your two
she scoopes you up
and kisses you gently
your puzzled
but you run over to you mother
and she cuddles you...
the next visit
is your first crush
your 10 and she hasnt seen you
she smiles widely
as you kiss your boyfriend
she can feel you
your love,not real and true of course,but shes happy either way
she glides beside you and touches your cheek...
her visits appear throughout special times in your life
birthdays
deaths
sadness when you need a smiling face
when your happy
shes so impressed with you
when your sixteen
she smiles as you make love to your true lover
she watches your 18
as you fall over drunk
she laughs
and picks you back up
'be more carefull'
and you see her through drunken eyes
you dont get that rotton again
she watches as you give birth to your baby daughter
and she kisses her gently
you are so happy
she cries out of love...
she cries out of a broken heart this time
as you bury your face in you tissue
your true mother has been lifted out of this world
and she guides her back to heaven
your so sad and she comforts you
later that year your dad dies
and she gets you through rough times
she listens and watches
as you live your life
watch you grow
and your family
you have two boys now and a girl
she's so proud
she blesses you every night as you say a prayer to her and her Lord
...but her last visit
is very close
and she smiles like she always does
your old now
and sitting in your chair
watching the rain dribble
its a sunday night
a cold one,like your birth
its late
and you hear her coming in
you open your eyes
and shes standing there
'come with me'
she says
and your back pain is gone
as she lifts you up
you feel strengh
and she smiles
you know her face
yes,you remember now
you part your lips to say,
and she nods
you close them
shes walking you up a stair case
and there is a blinding light,
'i can only guide you this far,take care...'
and she vanishes for the second and last time
and you walk through the light
loved and guided in the heart
of her and all your loved ones....


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feather of an angel

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 04:53:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



she smiles happily
and watches your eyes widen
she reaches out for you
and holds your hand
you cry because you are lifted up far away from her
and given to outstreched arms
you forgot her
and focus on this body
she is smiling also
happy
so you let out a babble
you do not understand
but you forgot the other women
and laugh happily
in the arms of your mother...
as you grow up
she comes back for visits
she watches you
as you fall over when your two
she scoopes you up
and kisses you gently
your puzzled
but you run over to you mother
and she cuddles you...
the next visit
is your first crush
your 10 and she hasnt seen you
she smiles widely
as you kiss your boyfriend
she can feel you
your love,not real and true of course,but shes happy either way
she glides beside you and touches your cheek...
her visits appear throughout special times in your life
birthdays
deaths
sadness when you need a smiling face
when your happy
shes so impressed with you
when your sixteen
she smiles as you make love to your true lover
she watches your 18
as you fall over drunk
she laughs
and picks you back up
'be more carefull'
and you see her through drunken eyes
you dont get that rotton again
she watches as you give birth to your baby daughter
and she kisses her gently
you are so happy
she cries out of love...
she cries out of a broken heart this time
as you bury your face in you tissue
your true mother has been lifted out of this world
and she guides her back to heaven
your so sad and she comforts you
later that year your dad dies
and she gets you through rough times
she listens and watches
as you live your life
watch you grow
and your family
you have two boys now and a girl
she's so proud
she blesses you every night as you say a prayer to her and her Lord
...but her last visit
is very close
and she smiles like she always does
your old now
and sitting in your chair
watching the rain dribble
its a sunday night
a cold one,like your birth
its late
and you hear her coming in
you open your eyes
and shes standing there
'come with me'
she says
and your back pain is gone
as she lifts you up
you feel strengh
and she smiles
you know her face
yes,you remember now
you part your lips to say,
and she nods
you close them
shes walking you up a stair case
and there is a blinding light,
'i can only guide you this far,take care...'
and she vanishes for the second and last time
and you walk through the light
loved and guided in the heart
of her and all your loved ones....






Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-26 16:53:10]
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Re: feather of an angel (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 06:58:38 PM AEST
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huh...this is original...very sweet and i must admit i had a little tear...great write...
luv always


Re: feather of an angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:03:00 PM AEST
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Yes I cried too,made me think of my mom whos my angel now! Christina




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