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Iconoclasm
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:28:47 PM in AEST
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I have to need this
I can't run away
Stumbling and fighting
Turning, spinning, suspicion lurking
At the corner and out
I wish I would have faith
The devil cuaght my eye
I can't bleed any more
I'm failing and alive
My pain,
He made it my fualt
There is no death
He took it from me
I lie in my grave, roaming
Tell me, does it make sence ?
That it shouldn't be ...
This new sort of awakening
Knowing that I, too
Shall bathe myself in the innocence,
The ignorance of the living
The fading treads of sunlight ...
Disapear, for the last time
Can you guess what's happening ? Hrmmm ....
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pyrofairyburning
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2004-07-26 15:28:47]
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Re: Iconoclasm
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by apollo on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:30:33 PM AEST
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hmm maybe you are giving in to the temptation of evil and slipping from the life that exists on earth? im not sure but this is a very tricky and inspring writing, i like it very much. i have read it through a couple of times and it gets better every time. write more!
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Re: Iconoclasm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:34:37 PM AEST
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| Sounds like you're questioning yourself. Hope you find your own voice! |
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Re: Iconoclasm
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by brown_eyez_ on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:03:09 PM AEST
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| hmmmmm.......interesting.....not sure i understand it...but it gets u thinking... |
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Re: Iconoclasm
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:09:11 PM AEST
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| I have tried and can not figure out what is happening..........but I like this poem none the less Great job. |
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