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Array ( [sid] => 57388 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WHAT IF!?!? [time] => 2004-07-24 09:01:09 [hometext] => about a friend of mine........ [bodytext] =>
He wanted me to go, and what if I did?
I wanted to go, but what if I did?

One thought keeps going through my head
what if I went would I be dead?
but then I wonder, what if I was there
would things be different would he still be here?

What if I was there, would I have tried
to stop the wreck in which he died?

But I was ill and refused to go
but I wish I knew what I now know.
For the pain inside me deep within,
is hundreds of times worse than how I felt then.

so what if I went runs through my head
and sometimes I tell myself I wish I did.
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WHAT IF!?!?

Contributed by angelface on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:01:09 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

He wanted me to go, and what if I did?
I wanted to go, but what if I did?

One thought keeps going through my head
what if I went would I be dead?
but then I wonder, what if I was there
would things be different would he still be here?

What if I was there, would I have tried
to stop the wreck in which he died?

But I was ill and refused to go
but I wish I knew what I now know.
For the pain inside me deep within,
is hundreds of times worse than how I felt then.

so what if I went runs through my head
and sometimes I tell myself I wish I did.

Copyright © angelface ... [ 2004-07-24 09:01:09]
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Re: WHAT IF!?!? (User Rating: 1 )
by xlooseroftomorrowx on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:52:28 AM AEST
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i know you may think its your fault that this happened to your friend.. but it isnt.. if you had have gone it wouldnt have stopped what happened,it would have only changed the fact that your alive today,and you should be glad that youre alive.And even though your friend is gone,he's still in your heart,and he knows its not your fault for what happened. I know how it feels to looser a friend..my friend jumped off a bridge,and sometimes i think if i had have been there,could i have stopped her..but i couldnt have..and im greatful it wasnt me who died.

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