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can you hear my voice calling, hear my screams?
I cry out for help, yet nobody hears
Nobody's around to wipe my tears
•••
Terrified in my corner, my eyes turning wet
The wind it whispers, just like my breath
I hide a secret, that's not to be found
I'll take it with me to the ground
•••
Nobody sees, it's hidden away
Under my fabric, where it will stay
I run my tounge across my painted lips
I touch my hair, i blow a soft kiss
•••
I turn in shame to never look back
Shadow of dreams, took me back
In my soul this will always dwell
I'll punish myself, my eyes are swelled
•••
I never left your side, till you said go away
In my shadow of dreams is where i'll stay
I'll now forsake my cut flesh body
You've proven to me, i am nobody [comments] => 7 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => OreO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

°°°Shadow of Dreams°°°

Contributed by OreO on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Standing behind my shadow of dreams
can you hear my voice calling, hear my screams?
I cry out for help, yet nobody hears
Nobody's around to wipe my tears
•••
Terrified in my corner, my eyes turning wet
The wind it whispers, just like my breath
I hide a secret, that's not to be found
I'll take it with me to the ground
•••
Nobody sees, it's hidden away
Under my fabric, where it will stay
I run my tounge across my painted lips
I touch my hair, i blow a soft kiss
•••
I turn in shame to never look back
Shadow of dreams, took me back
In my soul this will always dwell
I'll punish myself, my eyes are swelled
•••
I never left your side, till you said go away
In my shadow of dreams is where i'll stay
I'll now forsake my cut flesh body
You've proven to me, i am nobody

Copyright Â© OreO ... [ 2002-10-27 17:00:00]
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Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by idiotbox on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 06:52:52 PM AEST
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wow i really like it. i know where you are coming from... very good poem

Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:12:33 PM AEST
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Good write

Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:12:47 AM AEST
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i read this write, and it pains me to think i know many a folk caught up in the same mess. take care of yurself. it's a beautiful write, but you don't need a beautiful mess... kudos!! ;0) -daniel

Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Knowledge on Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:43:33 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM! Lets just hope your life will be just as good from now on, if not better.

-Knowledge

Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:59:40 AM AEST
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Very powerful write! But you are a somebody...a very special somebody. Those who cant see that are simply blind. Again, Great write! :o) Larry

Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 05:37:34 AM AEST
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duuuuuuude! this is goooooooood!!!!!!! i love alot i love alot. your a good writer!

Hug a moose!

Re: °°°Shadow of Dreams°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by darkeyedman on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:48:10 PM AEST
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i just read your shaving cream poem, now i read this. talk about opposite extremes. tough hardnosed poem, no smiles here. but good all the same. keep 'em coming. jim

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