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Array ( [sid] => 57049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seeking Help [time] => 2004-07-21 12:58:00 [hometext] => I will beat this for myself and for my love............... [bodytext] => I have never had the courage to ask,
When dealing with life got too hard a task,
But now I have for the sake of my love,
As I hold nothing higher above.

I thought I could deal with this alone,
It’s too hard now everything’s full blown,
Anger & depression come as a package,
In their wake they leave such wreckage.

Tomorrow to the doctors I will go,
Talk things through nice & slow,
Explain how I just can’t go on,
Feeling like an explosive time bomb.

Me & Mark used to be so close,
But now it’s all heartache in the post,
We love each other so much,
With our bond I don’t want to lose touch.

I know that I can beat this pain,
That lives in me & makes me act insane,
I have strength if I have you,
We deserve for our love to pull through.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 61 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Seeking Help

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I have never had the courage to ask,
When dealing with life got too hard a task,
But now I have for the sake of my love,
As I hold nothing higher above.

I thought I could deal with this alone,
It’s too hard now everything’s full blown,
Anger & depression come as a package,
In their wake they leave such wreckage.

Tomorrow to the doctors I will go,
Talk things through nice & slow,
Explain how I just can’t go on,
Feeling like an explosive time bomb.

Me & Mark used to be so close,
But now it’s all heartache in the post,
We love each other so much,
With our bond I don’t want to lose touch.

I know that I can beat this pain,
That lives in me & makes me act insane,
I have strength if I have you,
We deserve for our love to pull through.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-21 12:58:00]
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Re: Seeking Help (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:58:08 PM AEST
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Good for you, fight it all the way, don't let anger and depression win, you are much stronger than that,(I should listen to my own advice lol) good write pixie, keep going.

Ali xx

Re: Seeking Help (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:29:28 PM AEST
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you have the strength to pull through for you and mark. Just take things slowly but dont ever give up fighting for what you want in life hun!

love
Gen xx

Re: Seeking Help (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:12:02 PM AEST
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You go girl!
You are strong enough and you will beat this. I know you will.
Im always here for you too if you need me.
Such an emotion filled poem..
*hugs lots*
Phil xxx

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