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Array ( [sid] => 56996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waiting [time] => 2004-07-21 02:02:23 [hometext] => This poem is about waiting for that special someone to finally see that nothing matters except the way that you feel about each other. This one is dedicated to my special someone that i wish could see how much he means to me. [bodytext] => Caring,
The way you appear
Lost,
I just want to disappear
Delicate my feelings are
But you want no part
Confused I wait
Trying to repair my heart!

Loving,
The way you treat me
Together,
I pray we will soon be
Holding your feelings back
Wanting me to have more
But I want all of you
So what are we waiting for?

Waiting,
For your eyes to open
Alone,
While you have left me coping
Trying to finally understand
Why you put your heart on hold
While we could love each other
Letting everything unfold!

Crying,
Inside my tears fall
Frozen,
Letting my emotions stall
If not soon I see
That you care for me
Soon I will slip away
And I will be free!
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 32 [informant] => nagina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Waiting

Contributed by nagina on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:02:23 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Caring,
The way you appear
Lost,
I just want to disappear
Delicate my feelings are
But you want no part
Confused I wait
Trying to repair my heart!

Loving,
The way you treat me
Together,
I pray we will soon be
Holding your feelings back
Wanting me to have more
But I want all of you
So what are we waiting for?

Waiting,
For your eyes to open
Alone,
While you have left me coping
Trying to finally understand
Why you put your heart on hold
While we could love each other
Letting everything unfold!

Crying,
Inside my tears fall
Frozen,
Letting my emotions stall
If not soon I see
That you care for me
Soon I will slip away
And I will be free!




Copyright © nagina ... [ 2004-07-21 02:02:23]
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Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:23:42 AM AEST
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very, very nice hopefully the one you love will see the love that you hold for them is something that will not last forever and that they need to grab it now or maby lose it and never get a second chance at it.


Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:58:56 AM AEST
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I definitely like this one good write!


Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:32:11 PM AEST
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This is a great poem...good job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:41:14 PM AEST
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One look at this poem and he will definitely understand your emotions.
You've put it into words so well.




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