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shiver and shake,
my eyes rolling around
in my head.
Too much pain,
not enough blood.
In unendurable anxiety
I don't fit inside my skin.
My mind screams,
as I stumble and fall.
I tremor on the ground,
like a helpless child.
The depression has consumed as I
reach for the knife sitting
on the counter.
I scutter into a corner
and stab the blade
into my wrist,
and start to drag.
Again and again,
the blade licks my
waterways of life.
The blood spills,
quickly dripping to the floor.
I rest my head against the wall.
I look up to the ceiling
with tear filled eyes.
I pray to God
to save my soul,
and that I'll
see him soon.
My head goes limp
as I sit in a pool of
burgundy depression. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 36 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Unbearable Suicide

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:46:42 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Out of limits I
shiver and shake,
my eyes rolling around
in my head.
Too much pain,
not enough blood.
In unendurable anxiety
I don't fit inside my skin.
My mind screams,
as I stumble and fall.
I tremor on the ground,
like a helpless child.
The depression has consumed as I
reach for the knife sitting
on the counter.
I scutter into a corner
and stab the blade
into my wrist,
and start to drag.
Again and again,
the blade licks my
waterways of life.
The blood spills,
quickly dripping to the floor.
I rest my head against the wall.
I look up to the ceiling
with tear filled eyes.
I pray to God
to save my soul,
and that I'll
see him soon.
My head goes limp
as I sit in a pool of
burgundy depression.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-07-20 11:46:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unbearable Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:56:23 AM AEST
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i know how yoi feel hunni... great expression of hurt and pain......

pixie xx

Re: Unbearable Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:19:52 PM AEST
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a dark poem!
very well written.
please don't go just yet!
many of us on this website care about you!

Re: Unbearable Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:51:36 PM AEST
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great poem
very dark
ahaha i like it hehe

Re: Unbearable Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:45:58 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem I love the way you write..your emotions just pour out ...this poem I can relate too

Re: Unbearable Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:01:40 AM AEST
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nice poem deep words i like it its good thank you :P -grip-

Re: Unbearable Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:26:49 PM AEST
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omg, beautifully written
loved it so much!
..burgundy depression.....what a way to finish!

Tweek

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