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Almost but not quite
I see but I’m blind
I’m blind but with sight

I smile but I’m sad
I’m good but I’m bad
Don’t want what I got
But crave what I had

I’m right but I’m wrong
I’m weak but I’m strong
I so love my life
But soon it’ll be gone

I love but I hate
Destroy and create
I must change the world
Before it’s too late

Impulsive but meek
Awake but I’m sleep
Though my eyes are dry
Inside I still weep

Ok, not all right
Almost but not quite
A lone warrior
But still I must fight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Elocin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Ok, Not All Right

Contributed by Elocin on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:31:13 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Ok, not all right
Almost but not quite
I see but I’m blind
I’m blind but with sight

I smile but I’m sad
I’m good but I’m bad
Don’t want what I got
But crave what I had

I’m right but I’m wrong
I’m weak but I’m strong
I so love my life
But soon it’ll be gone

I love but I hate
Destroy and create
I must change the world
Before it’s too late

Impulsive but meek
Awake but I’m sleep
Though my eyes are dry
Inside I still weep

Ok, not all right
Almost but not quite
A lone warrior
But still I must fight

Copyright Â© Elocin ... [ 2004-07-19 00:31:13]
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Re: Ok, Not All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:37:46 AM AEST
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I rather liked this one.
I know that feeling and you did a wonderful job writing it out.
Some good wording in this one.

Re: Ok, Not All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:44:14 AM AEST
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I liked this one alot. It has a certain rythm(Sp?) Cool write, and I can relate. ~Dusty~

Re: Ok, Not All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:43:53 AM AEST
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enjoyable write you captured the essance of frustrations well with this I also relate!!
Michelle

Re: Ok, Not All Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:08:26 AM AEST
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Sharp, punchy write. Brevity is the soul of wit, as some say, and you've captured your emotions very well here, with many, varied images.

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