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Problems in a Bottle
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:01:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Four years strong,
Love in every moment,
When they were together,
Time seemed to stop,
And every moment apart,
Was like a million years,
Was to long,
Then she found another,
She thought could care more,
So she smashed his heart,
Into a million pieces,
Unable to be put together,
Every night he cried and cried,
Wishing to hole her,
One last time,
The pain got worse,
As time slowly passed,
And the bottle of ,
Looked more and more appealing,
One drink truned to two,
Trying to forget her,
Every night the pain got worse,
And the drinking increased,
3, 4, 5 bottles a night,
Till he drank him-self,
To death!
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Re: Problems in a Bottle
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:18:03 PM AEST
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Yes, this poem reveals the truth of the bottle. The opening in the top can lead to so many worse problems and it is hard to climb out of.
Excellent description.
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