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Array ( [sid] => 56583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Maybe [time] => 2004-07-18 00:04:48 [hometext] => This is a bit mushy for me, but I kinda wanted to write about somehting that happened to me for once. [bodytext] => He stands there, staring at me.
He thinks I"m beautiful and smart...
I might actually believe him.
Maybe...

He holds my hand while we sit alone.
He doesn't do it in front of my parents,
but I still think he cares.
Maybe...

My friends all go "AHHH" while I blush.
He doesn't care, I don't even think he hears them.
I tell them to shut up while they chase me and I ask him for some help.
Maybe...

Maybe I won't get hurt again.
Maybe he's real.
Maybe I am what he says.
And... Maybe he does care. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Ceres [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Maybe

Contributed by Ceres on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:04:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He stands there, staring at me.
He thinks I"m beautiful and smart...
I might actually believe him.
Maybe...

He holds my hand while we sit alone.
He doesn't do it in front of my parents,
but I still think he cares.
Maybe...

My friends all go "AHHH" while I blush.
He doesn't care, I don't even think he hears them.
I tell them to shut up while they chase me and I ask him for some help.
Maybe...

Maybe I won't get hurt again.
Maybe he's real.
Maybe I am what he says.
And... Maybe he does care.

Copyright © Ceres ... [ 2004-07-18 00:04:48]
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Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by nexxa on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:24:28 AM AEST
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Good for mushy lol I have been trying to get away from writing about what happens to me as I think most of what ppl write is in direct connection to the happiness, pain, anguish or whatever emotion they are experiencing at the time so I had to read this from what you said in your comment and its great and sweet and I can picture it all in my head good write and thank you.

Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:11:21 AM AEST
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great write,

pixie xx

Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 08:54:33 PM AEST
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Mushy? Perhaps, but whoever said anything was wrong with that? This is very touching. I hope you find lasting love. Remember, true love is not the romance, but the determination. It is being wholly selfless for the one you love. Don't settle for less.
Take care now.
Andrew

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