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Array ( [sid] => 56566 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My shoulder [time] => 2004-07-17 20:48:07 [hometext] => my brother just broke up with one of my friends today so this is for her [bodytext] => crying a lake of tears
all your worst fears have been confirmed
use my shoulder
its here for you
im here for you
you have had abest friend who didnt make it
and a love that just couldnt make it
happy endings never come
i told you not to love him
you say your life is going to hell
ive been through it
most people dont have a shoulder to on which to cry
but your a lucky one
just use mine
love is over rated
girls like us werent meant for love
only cinderella and and snow white types are ment for happieness
not us
this is your first fall i will help you through it
no more trying live happily ever after
we will never make it through
but use my shoulder
cry on my shoulder
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 55 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
My shoulder

Contributed by brokensoul on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



crying a lake of tears
all your worst fears have been confirmed
use my shoulder
its here for you
im here for you
you have had abest friend who didnt make it
and a love that just couldnt make it
happy endings never come
i told you not to love him
you say your life is going to hell
ive been through it
most people dont have a shoulder to on which to cry
but your a lucky one
just use mine
love is over rated
girls like us werent meant for love
only cinderella and and snow white types are ment for happieness
not us
this is your first fall i will help you through it
no more trying live happily ever after
we will never make it through
but use my shoulder
cry on my shoulder




Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-07-17 20:48:07]
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Re: My shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:01:41 PM AEST
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brokensoul,
this is a beautiful caring write, but i must question one part. "girls like us are not meant for love?" what do you mean? all are meant for love, there is someone out there somewhere who loves you both, just look around.

the voice


Re: My shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:22:12 AM AEST
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very touching and caring write,

pixie xx




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