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Innocence?
That I laugh
You know as well as I do
Innocence does not exist

You may be young
To be an object of judgement
The acts of a child
Are that of an adult

It is not a subject of debate
This much Iam certain
Those who laugh at little things
Are those who laugh at bad things as well

It is easy for me
A fledgling adult
To be as disgraceful as Iam
But I come from a long line of disgusting acts

Be not so fast as to criticise me
The longing to be innocent is beautiful
Innocence is peaceful
It is a trait Iam most fond of

Just the lie saying Iam innocent
Truly is a sign
Or am I just blind
No, Iam right, I like it this way

This eternal struggle that stems from within
Comes from the ghosts, inlay in my mind
This is my destiny I build from my experiences
That I love, is that Iam denied

You are young
So very perfect
Innocence is a virtue
I abstand to with-hold

I never want you to grow up
To loose your innocence
Your sweet look in your eyes
The feeling of been your age
Swells into my heart once again

To who I love
And thou’st understand me
Iam in love with your innocence
A weakness inside Iam unable to set free

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Rather Disgusting

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:38:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Innocence?
That I laugh
You know as well as I do
Innocence does not exist

You may be young
To be an object of judgement
The acts of a child
Are that of an adult

It is not a subject of debate
This much Iam certain
Those who laugh at little things
Are those who laugh at bad things as well

It is easy for me
A fledgling adult
To be as disgraceful as Iam
But I come from a long line of disgusting acts

Be not so fast as to criticise me
The longing to be innocent is beautiful
Innocence is peaceful
It is a trait Iam most fond of

Just the lie saying Iam innocent
Truly is a sign
Or am I just blind
No, Iam right, I like it this way

This eternal struggle that stems from within
Comes from the ghosts, inlay in my mind
This is my destiny I build from my experiences
That I love, is that Iam denied

You are young
So very perfect
Innocence is a virtue
I abstand to with-hold

I never want you to grow up
To loose your innocence
Your sweet look in your eyes
The feeling of been your age
Swells into my heart once again

To who I love
And thou’st understand me
Iam in love with your innocence
A weakness inside Iam unable to set free

Copyright Â© 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-07-17 18:38:27]
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Re: Rather Disgusting (User Rating: 1 )
by Ripper_Something_Unusual on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:48:13 PM AEST
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well done rowan....u pedo. Just joking good stuff...good stuff...

Re: Rather Disgusting (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:48:18 PM AEST
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i agree innocence does not exist very powerful write

Re: Rather Disgusting (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:49:43 PM AEST
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Hmm. I take it this is about loving someone **younger** than yourself?
It's a very well written poem. Some poems are more poetic than others, this one seems quite poetic to me.
Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Rather Disgusting (User Rating: 1 )
by 01_zanzebar on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:25:18 AM AEST
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the way i represent my wordage in my poetry is the type of emotion it broils in my heart, some are more linear than other, some are very powerfully written and some are simple. The feelings i have about 'younger' girls is that of one ive have come to accept, so its more of a story to tell, than a poem to reciet, this is hard for some to understand, but its true.

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