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Array ( [sid] => 5630 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => WHY [time] => 2002-10-26 06:30:00 [hometext] => I HOPE THERE IS PEOPLE OUT THERE THAT CAN RELATE TO THIS.THIS IS THE FIRST TIME ANYONE HAS SEEN ANY OF MY POEMS. [bodytext] => YOU WONDER WHY
WE'RE DRIFTING APART
IT'S BECAUSE ANOTHER
HAS STOLEN MY HEART

HE BRIGHTENS UP
THE DARKEST ROOM
HE MAKES MY HEART
GO BOOM,BOOM,BOOM

THE LOOK IN HIS EYES
THE SMILE ON HIS FACE
OH HOW IT MAKES
MY HEART RACE

HE MAKES ME TREMBLE
WITH THE SLIGHTEST TOUCH
I WANT TO BE WITH HIM
I LOVE HIM SO MUCH

WHEN I LOOK AT HIM
THAT'S WHEN I SEE
JUST HOW HAPPY
HE MAKES ME [comments] => 6 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 33 [informant] => tiger_babyj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

WHY

Contributed by tiger_babyj on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

YOU WONDER WHY
WE'RE DRIFTING APART
IT'S BECAUSE ANOTHER
HAS STOLEN MY HEART

HE BRIGHTENS UP
THE DARKEST ROOM
HE MAKES MY HEART
GO BOOM,BOOM,BOOM

THE LOOK IN HIS EYES
THE SMILE ON HIS FACE
OH HOW IT MAKES
MY HEART RACE

HE MAKES ME TREMBLE
WITH THE SLIGHTEST TOUCH
I WANT TO BE WITH HIM
I LOVE HIM SO MUCH

WHEN I LOOK AT HIM
THAT'S WHEN I SEE
JUST HOW HAPPY
HE MAKES ME

Copyright © tiger_babyj ... [ 2002-10-26 06:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WHY (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:44:40 AM AEST
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hI tIGER-N-WELCOME!!!!!!
CAN'T wait 2 see more!!!!!!
Very good write!!!!!
PEACE, LUV-N-tIGERS,
EMY

Re: WHY (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:02:15 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..This is lovely...and easily related to....hoping to see many more..
Jenni

Re: WHY (User Rating: 1 )
by ChristopherFriedrich on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 10:37:08 AM AEST
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Cruel, Cruel, Cruel, but very nice write. Welcome, and keep it up!

Re: WHY (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 12:51:48 PM AEST
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Welcome, And keep writing these good poems!Christina

Re: WHY (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:58:29 AM AEST
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aww i really like this one, great job, its so sweet in the most unfaithful way.

Re: WHY (User Rating: 1 )
by horseluver on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:34:03 PM AEST
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I cannot help but see your poem from a different perspective. I am losing my best friend of 7 years to a boyfriend who tells her everything she wants to hear and gives her everything she wants. She is so caught up in him I dont exist to her anymore. I think that if she could write-your poem would be close to her own words. If you are writing this from experience-please be sure you are not hurting anyone who cares about you like she is to me. Very well written and it touched my heart.

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