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Array ( [sid] => 56244 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sour Flowers [time] => 2004-07-15 04:40:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cans piled up all over my room
Tell the story of my life thus far and reflect the build up inside my head
My room paints a picture of my scorched personality
Clothes lay in shambles on my floor
The stress of this mess is too much too look at

I would kill for the answers to these problems but instead I’ll keep quiet
and search for a solution inside my mind
I sit and ponder to many things at my computer
My thoughts are a mess of mixed emotions from all sides of the brain
I’m hoping to make since of something

I am stuck in this 4 wall place with endless possibilities inside of me
A sole longing to get out.
Out of this place I know all too well
I’m the cause of my emotional battles.
I repeat myself too much and comprehend things beyond the level of normal

So many memories I wish I would have written down
And so many I wish I could tare apart.
My reflection is someone I don’t even know
Someone that I wish I wasn’t
How do I find my places in this mess of a world

Everyday is always a new fight
The few days when there isn’t are the ones you WANT to remember.
My sour flowers are wasted and not heard
I’m never good enough
and I never will be.

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Sour Flowers

Contributed by xxwagsxx on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:40:32 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Cans piled up all over my room
Tell the story of my life thus far and reflect the build up inside my head
My room paints a picture of my scorched personality
Clothes lay in shambles on my floor
The stress of this mess is too much too look at

I would kill for the answers to these problems but instead I’ll keep quiet
and search for a solution inside my mind
I sit and ponder to many things at my computer
My thoughts are a mess of mixed emotions from all sides of the brain
I’m hoping to make since of something

I am stuck in this 4 wall place with endless possibilities inside of me
A sole longing to get out.
Out of this place I know all too well
I’m the cause of my emotional battles.
I repeat myself too much and comprehend things beyond the level of normal

So many memories I wish I would have written down
And so many I wish I could tare apart.
My reflection is someone I don’t even know
Someone that I wish I wasn’t
How do I find my places in this mess of a world

Everyday is always a new fight
The few days when there isn’t are the ones you WANT to remember.
My sour flowers are wasted and not heard
I’m never good enough
and I never will be.





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Re: Sour Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by TheOneAgain on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:06:59 AM AEST
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This is a very in-depth look at raw emotion...I'm very glad you decided to share this with us...excellent write.


Re: Sour Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by whitt on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 11:01:19 PM AEST
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your poem is deep and beautiful :) i can relate to it ... specially the last three lines




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