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rain
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:34:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the sky is shedding a lake of tears
and the earth is is becoming soft in remorse
evryone is stuck inside in remorse for the sky
so much pain it is showering on the earth
but it cant help it
its beautiful blue hues have been shaded gray
its tears bring back so many memories
smashing them against my body
one at a time
i try to ecscape fom it inside
but the sky keeps wailing
raining memories
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brokensoul
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2004-07-13 16:34:36]
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Re: rain
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:40:06 PM AEST
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Wow, i like the idea here.
Raining memories, i really like that.
The first two lines were brilliant.
great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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