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Array ( [sid] => 56017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Rose [time] => 2004-07-13 15:25:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Twisting emotions
its her sick little
giving the pain away
the pain that has been bestowed upon her

she brings so much love
and then transforms it into devastation
she is the black rose in a bed of red roses
she is the most beautiful
she smells the sweetest
but her thorns cut the deepest

shes a shakey little siren
playing tricks on girls and boys
they think there love with her is so pure, true
but she ecscapes with their hearts
and hangs them from the thorns on her sleek stem

she keeps a clean reputation
they say she is the best love you will ever have
they say she has a heart of gold through an through
and they are right
no feeling of love
only the feeling fragile chunk of gold being pounded flat [comments] => 3 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 13 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Black Rose

Contributed by brokensoul on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Twisting emotions
its her sick little
giving the pain away
the pain that has been bestowed upon her

she brings so much love
and then transforms it into devastation
she is the black rose in a bed of red roses
she is the most beautiful
she smells the sweetest
but her thorns cut the deepest

shes a shakey little siren
playing tricks on girls and boys
they think there love with her is so pure, true
but she ecscapes with their hearts
and hangs them from the thorns on her sleek stem

she keeps a clean reputation
they say she is the best love you will ever have
they say she has a heart of gold through an through
and they are right
no feeling of love
only the feeling fragile chunk of gold being pounded flat

Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-07-13 15:25:04]
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Re: Black Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 11:03:42 PM AEST
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An emotional write. Your description is pretty good.

Re: Black Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 11:52:26 PM AEST
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awesome I loved it. I liked all the comparisons and analogies to roses. Keep it up Gemma.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Black Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:30:23 PM AEST
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dramatic, but not overly so
it's sad to think of an existence like that

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