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Array ( [sid] => 56005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Corkscrew [time] => 2004-07-13 14:37:10 [hometext] => Recently my father was put in jail because of back child support he owed my mom. He and I are like best friends and the whole thing is bull***** that he is even there. These are just some thoughts I had about it. [bodytext] => im always at a theme park
going up and down
on the roller coaster
of many smiles and frowns
its so hard to describe the thrill and fear
when you get up to the top
cause soon you know its coming
that great big stomach stealing drop
down into the tunnel
of darkness and disaster
but no matter what the next days coming
and soon the day right after
these satan bars of evil
are keeping you from me
i think that its just flat out crap
to be able to see your kids only a few hours a week
no matter what they say
youre not a dead beat dad
your the silliest and sweetest dad
a girl could ever have
this coaster of life
has been one hell of a ride
but i know that its not over and when i need help
no matter what you'll be there by my side [comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 23 [informant] => butter0606 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Corkscrew

Contributed by butter0606 on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

im always at a theme park
going up and down
on the roller coaster
of many smiles and frowns
its so hard to describe the thrill and fear
when you get up to the top
cause soon you know its coming
that great big stomach stealing drop
down into the tunnel
of darkness and disaster
but no matter what the next days coming
and soon the day right after
these satan bars of evil
are keeping you from me
i think that its just flat out crap
to be able to see your kids only a few hours a week
no matter what they say
youre not a dead beat dad
your the silliest and sweetest dad
a girl could ever have
this coaster of life
has been one hell of a ride
but i know that its not over and when i need help
no matter what you'll be there by my side

Copyright © butter0606 ... [ 2004-07-13 14:37:10]
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Re: Corkscrew (User Rating: 1 )
by white_rain_angel on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:46:50 PM AEST
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Wow..... that is bull**** that your father can't see his kids more then a few hours, that was a very nice poem

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