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Array ( [sid] => 55941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Welcome to My World [time] => 2004-07-13 02:33:40 [hometext] => A dark poem [bodytext] => If you enter my life, you will see things never seen before
Will you believe in my soul? Darkness swells around me
As you creep into my layer, screams rupture the air
You walk through my essence and taste blood falling down
My domain is so black, you might drown in the pain
Things only in the scariest of imaginations, truelly exist in my world
Come in the invitation still stands, my blood is sweet
Do not be frightened, it will not hurt me
It's a small sacrifice for immortality
Though your innocence is killed
Your life becomes darkness and forever young fun
We'll live forever in the darkness of my world, my kind of fun
So just give in, just let go
Who will we tell? Not a person will know
After my blood travels through your veins, my body heals again
Your transformation will take place, My blood sucking friend
So sit down, take a break, soon it will be through
I'm cutting my arm, the red liquid flows free
Don't be shy, it's quite a rush
Now stop your screaming, dont make a fuss
That's right, look in my eyes, take my arm in your hand
Become one with the night, just listen to the sand
It pours the time away, feel the rhythm
Get caught up in the flow
No don't panic, you must let go
It's time for sleep, just watch my eyes
Just lay down and see the night skies
Dream of your maker, dream of my eyes
Think of my essence flowing, think of my life
You dream of things that are to be
You gain many powers, like telepathy
A force surrounds you, as my world becomes yours
Tommorow you will wake and realize your different
There's two points in your mouth, your thirst cannot be satisfied
No matter how you drink, your thirst is not quenched
Welcome to my world, my blood sucking friend [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Adriean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
Welcome to My World

Contributed by Adriean on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:33:40 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



If you enter my life, you will see things never seen before
Will you believe in my soul? Darkness swells around me
As you creep into my layer, screams rupture the air
You walk through my essence and taste blood falling down
My domain is so black, you might drown in the pain
Things only in the scariest of imaginations, truelly exist in my world
Come in the invitation still stands, my blood is sweet
Do not be frightened, it will not hurt me
It's a small sacrifice for immortality
Though your innocence is killed
Your life becomes darkness and forever young fun
We'll live forever in the darkness of my world, my kind of fun
So just give in, just let go
Who will we tell? Not a person will know
After my blood travels through your veins, my body heals again
Your transformation will take place, My blood sucking friend
So sit down, take a break, soon it will be through
I'm cutting my arm, the red liquid flows free
Don't be shy, it's quite a rush
Now stop your screaming, dont make a fuss
That's right, look in my eyes, take my arm in your hand
Become one with the night, just listen to the sand
It pours the time away, feel the rhythm
Get caught up in the flow
No don't panic, you must let go
It's time for sleep, just watch my eyes
Just lay down and see the night skies
Dream of your maker, dream of my eyes
Think of my essence flowing, think of my life
You dream of things that are to be
You gain many powers, like telepathy
A force surrounds you, as my world becomes yours
Tommorow you will wake and realize your different
There's two points in your mouth, your thirst cannot be satisfied
No matter how you drink, your thirst is not quenched
Welcome to my world, my blood sucking friend




Copyright © Adriean ... [ 2004-07-13 02:33:40]
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Re: Welcome to My World (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:56:34 AM AEST
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is your blood sweet? seems I am now tasting it ..aah..I have lost my senses
this is very much enchanting....venkat..




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