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As I lay here dying, this is what you've done to me
Memories of us together are running through my brain
The way you use to kiss me would drive me insane
I feel my time is getting shorter
My breath is getting shallow and my body growing colder
I bet you never knew that the way you use to hit me killed me too
Inside I was dying
But all you saw outside were bruises and a painted on smile
Every night I use to cry for you
Well, now my blood has left my body and I'm feeling rather numb
Perhaps a new and better life awaits me
So good-bye my love, you've killed me [comments] => 5 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Katie2008 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Painted on Smile

Contributed by Katie2008 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:56:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The blood that flows from my veins screams out your name
As I lay here dying, this is what you've done to me
Memories of us together are running through my brain
The way you use to kiss me would drive me insane
I feel my time is getting shorter
My breath is getting shallow and my body growing colder
I bet you never knew that the way you use to hit me killed me too
Inside I was dying
But all you saw outside were bruises and a painted on smile
Every night I use to cry for you
Well, now my blood has left my body and I'm feeling rather numb
Perhaps a new and better life awaits me
So good-bye my love, you've killed me

Copyright © Katie2008 ... [ 2004-07-12 14:56:05]
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Re: Painted on Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:11:23 PM AEST
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Wow... This is an awesome write focused on a very serious subject. Very good

Re: Painted on Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:11:24 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. No one should have to live in a relationship that is physically hurtful not to mention emotionally. Great write.

Re: Painted on Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:22:38 PM AEST
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wow its an amazing poem good job!!

Re: Painted on Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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wow. awesome job. i really love this poem (and u ;) ).

Re: Painted on Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:47:39 AM AEST
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Very powerful....awesome job really....I'm running out of things to say to all your very great poems...haha...keep it up

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