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A sweet tender tone, will fill the air,
For you are the One , that I care,
You are my love, my only, my dear.

I,ll feed you grapes, from the vine,
For you are always, always to be mine,
With Fruits of the field, we will dine,
And a juicy sweet Mandarin wine.

Silken Golden thread you'll wear,
Riding on an Apache mare,
Stardust and fragrant incense hair,
Knowing my love, I,ll always be near.

Lips tender to the touch,
Oh, I love you, Love you so much,
We'll swim naked in the running stream,
Where the waters quiver and gleam.

And there on that Moonlit night
We'll take passion, to its highest height,
Moonlit reflection, shines on your lucent face,
And the water runs off your body,like Golden lace.

© Robert Kilpatrick [comments] => 9 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 21 [informant] => robertkilpatrick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

MOONLIT NIGHT

Contributed by robertkilpatrick on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

And Oh, you whisper in my Ear,
A sweet tender tone, will fill the air,
For you are the One , that I care,
You are my love, my only, my dear.

I,ll feed you grapes, from the vine,
For you are always, always to be mine,
With Fruits of the field, we will dine,
And a juicy sweet Mandarin wine.

Silken Golden thread you'll wear,
Riding on an Apache mare,
Stardust and fragrant incense hair,
Knowing my love, I,ll always be near.

Lips tender to the touch,
Oh, I love you, Love you so much,
We'll swim naked in the running stream,
Where the waters quiver and gleam.

And there on that Moonlit night
We'll take passion, to its highest height,
Moonlit reflection, shines on your lucent face,
And the water runs off your body,like Golden lace.

© Robert Kilpatrick

Copyright Â© robertkilpatrick ... [ 2004-07-11 19:03:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:29:15 PM AEST
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wow oh wow, that is so beautiful. i love the descriptions and imagery, you did such a wonderful job on this!

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:32:54 PM AEST
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Stirring sensual overtones with the beauty of Nature. What could be more beautiful and enticing.

Rita

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by PieceOfABrokenSoul on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:35:53 PM AEST
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Very good, very descriptive. A scene I've always imagined sharing with that special soul.
Great write.

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:46:18 PM AEST
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The whole piece created a gorgeous scene in my mind,left me daydreaming lol..

"Silken Golden thread you'll wear,
Riding on an Apache mare,
Stardust and fragrant incense hair,
Knowing my love, I,ll always be near."

*sigh*

LW

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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very good use of imagry and very romantic. very well done. keep it up ;)

~Sara

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:09:18 PM AEST
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You've described such elegant love.
Beautiful and amazingly sensual.

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:47:11 PM AEST
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Why oh why can't all men write beautiful stuff like this?You sure brought me elsewhere throughout the entire read,I found this to be an exquisite beauty in every way.May your pen keep writing poems such as this,pure and from the heart.
PumpkinPie

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:19:00 AM AEST
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I think a lot of woman will be flocking to read your poetic sultry words.

Re: MOONLIT NIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:19:33 AM AEST
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This is beuatiful, you have such a way with expression,..... wonderful job,

pixie xx

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